Talk:2020 Welsh Open (snooker)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 06:52, 5 July 2021 (UTC)

Shall review for the July 2021 GAN Backlog Drive MWright96 (talk) 06:52, 5 July 2021 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Infobox

 * The three flagicons should be replaced by the flagathlete templates as has been done in the main draw section

Lead

 * "It was the 12th ranking event of the 2019–20 snooker season, and the final event of the season's Home Nations Series." - repetition of "event"
 * Changed Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 14:07, 8 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "the highest made by Wilson made the highest," - repetition of "made the highest"
 * Changed Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 14:07, 8 July 2021 (UTC)

Format

 * "the twelfth edition of the event." - 29th
 * My mistake! Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 14:14, 8 July 2021 (UTC)
 * The term frame should be wikilinked to the appropriate article only on the first mention
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 14:14, 8 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Who broadcast the tournament internationally?
 * I'm wondering if maybe I should do these as a table in future. Food for thought, added. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 14:14, 8 July 2021 (UTC)

Prize fund

 * The prize for the maximum break and the total prize fund need to be verified by a reliable source
 * Added Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:08, 10 July 2021 (UTC)

Summary

 * "Ashley Carty defeated Joe Perry, seeded 17th" - missing a comma at the end of this text
 * The above text needs verifying with a reliable source since World Snooker does not mention Perry was seeded 17th
 * Removed. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:12, 10 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "Kyren Wilson defeated Jackson Page 4-3," - en dash here please per MOS:DASH
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:12, 10 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "Murphy defeated Alfie Burden in the second round 4–3, before defeating Ben Woollaston and Dominic Dale 4–1." - repetition of "defeated"
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:12, 10 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "Yan defeated Higgins 5–2." - perhaps expand more on this short four-word sentence?
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:12, 10 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "Wilson defeated O'Sullivan in the first semi-final on a deciding frame 6–5, whilst Murphy defeated Yan by the same scoreline" - same issue as above
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:16, 10 July 2021 (UTC)
 * The term century break can also be wikilinked
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:16, 10 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "and made a second century break" - how many points did Murphy score during his second century break?
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:16, 10 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "On the resumption," - On resumption of the match,
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:16, 10 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "to win frame nine and won frame ten with a third century break" - repetition of "wo(i)n"
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:16, 10 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "This was Murphy's second championship of the season," - second championship victory of the season,
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:16, 10 July 2021 (UTC)

Qualifying round

 * The two flagicons should be replaced by the flagathlete templates as has been done in the main draw section
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:05, 10 July 2021 (UTC)