Talk:2021 Championship League (ranking)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 03:18, 25 August 2023 (UTC)

I'll review this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk)  @ 03:18, 25 August 2023 (UTC)

Comments

 * In the prose parts of the article, you lower case groups, i.e. group E and group 9. Yet the sources appear to capitalize "group" and you capitalize group in the tables. Be consistent across the article.
 * I was going to comment on this, but it does seem like sources do treat these as a proper noun.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:27, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
 * In the summary section, you have group eight but in the next section group 9, "eight" should be "8"
 * Fixed  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:27, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
 * World number 115 won group 24,, is the reader supposed to know who this is? (sorry, I don't know snooker very well)
 * Yeah,you are right - completely missed out the point!  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:27, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
 * According to the source, Anthony Hamilton scored 5 points in Group 1 during Stage 1 (you have 4)
 * The source is wrong. It's impossible for him to have five points after losing a game. Per WP:CALC, it's been fixed to the correct result. Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:27, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Where did you get the highest break data for inclusion in all the tables? The sources provided (at least to my eye) don't provide this.
 * That's because the WST (organisers) decided to take down their very well made statistics page, and replace it with something that doesn't work. I'll provide archives.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:35, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Your sources for Stage 2 and Stage 3 are for the wrong year. Also, you have no source for the final. It looks like you already have the right sources in the article (Ref 8, 13, 18). Please fix this.
 * It was just the archive. This should be fixed now. I've added the cites for the final.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:43, 25 August 2023 (UTC)