Talk:2021 UK Championship/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 16:57, 10 March 2022 (UTC)

Comments
 * One ref in the lead for the sponsor only, repeat that info in the main body and reference it there instead of this lone warrior in the lead.
 * Removed Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:38, 14 March 2022 (UTC)
 * Could link Seed (sports) as it's a bit jargon.
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:38, 14 March 2022 (UTC)


 * Could add the nationalities of the finalists in the prose lead, as it seems important enough for them to have those flags in the infobox.
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:38, 14 March 2022 (UTC)


 * "the 1984 event, it became a ranking event" event/event.
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:38, 14 March 2022 (UTC)


 * "The event is the first Triple Crown tournament" presumably "was"?
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:38, 14 March 2022 (UTC)


 * "128 participants, 119 players from the World Snooker Tour, and nine" did MOSNUM for comparable figures change while I was out?
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:38, 14 March 2022 (UTC)


 * Could link "break" (in "Highest break ") to cuegloss, previous links were to the specific century/maximum articles.
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:38, 14 March 2022 (UTC)


 * For NZ, do you really mean Sky Sport (New Zealand) instead of Sky Sports?
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:38, 14 March 2022 (UTC)


 * Consider linking seed in the main body too.
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:38, 14 March 2022 (UTC)


 * "champion Neil Robertson lost" overlinked."
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:38, 14 March 2022 (UTC)


 * " Fergal O'Brien, Judd Trump, and" Trump overlinked here.
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:38, 14 March 2022 (UTC)


 * "pulsatile tinnitus" is there a link or even explanation as to what this is?
 * From google - Pulsatile tinnitus is a rhythmical noise that beats at the same rate as the heart and is the sound of blood circulating the body. Can't say I've found a suitable link. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:38, 14 March 2022 (UTC)


 * I think the comments made about amateurs could warrant a "controversy" section, but it's not essential here for GAN.
 * I try my best to stay away from controversy sections unless completely necessary. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:38, 14 March 2022 (UTC)

That's all I have on a quick run-through. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 17:17, 10 March 2022 (UTC)
 * "Speaking on Eurosport..." overlinked.
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:49, 16 March 2022 (UTC)
 * "Eleven of the world's top 13 ranked" wouldn't that be "top-13-ranked"?
 * Indeed. Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:49, 16 March 2022 (UTC)
 * In the summary table, why are the number of century breaks in italics?
 * it's an unofficial thing that editors add for when there's no leader. No idea why. Removed Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:49, 16 March 2022 (UTC)
 * "York Barbican, York, England, 5 December 2021." doesn't need a full stop.
 * done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:49, 16 March 2022 (UTC)
 * Check ref formatting for WST, is it just WST or wst.tv or what?
 * Now consistent. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:49, 16 March 2022 (UTC)
 * Check for spaced hyphens which should be en-dashes in ref titles.
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:49, 16 March 2022 (UTC)
 * Don't put the publisher or website in reference titles (e.g. ref 13).
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:49, 16 March 2022 (UTC)
 * Eurosport in the refs is in italics while it's not in the main article. Check others (e.g. BBC Sport).
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:49, 16 March 2022 (UTC)
 * Ref 18 doesn't have a publication date.
 * Ref 28 says "Eurosport.com" but it's Eurosport.co.uk? Is there a need to bring the URL or just make all Eurosport references as "Eurosport"?
 * Changed all to Eurosport. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:49, 16 March 2022 (UTC)
 * Ref 19 no publication date.
 * Added Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:58, 16 March 2022 (UTC)
 * Ref 23 no publisher details.
 * Added Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:58, 16 March 2022 (UTC)
 * Most of the BBC Sport refs could have author and publication dates added.
 * Added Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:58, 16 March 2022 (UTC)
 * Ref 31 no publisher details.
 * Added Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:58, 16 March 2022 (UTC)
 * Is it World Snooker or World Snooker?
 * I've changed/ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:49, 16 March 2022 (UTC)
 * Hi . Should be all covered. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:58, 16 March 2022 (UTC)