Talk:2021 Welsh Open (snooker)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 17:18, 26 September 2021 (UTC)

Shall review MWright96 (talk) 17:18, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * "It was the fifth of six events in the European Series and the fourth and final event of the Home Nations Series." - repetition of "event(s)"
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 14:47, 28 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "Ranked 81st in the world, Brown became the lowest-ranked player to win a ranking event since world number 93 Dave Harold won the 1993 Asian Open.[1] He also became the first Northern Irish player to win a Welsh Open title.[2]" - think these two sentences can also be mentioned in the prose
 * Moved to body Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 14:47, 28 September 2021 (UTC)

Format

 * Wikilink the term frames to the relevant article only on the first mention
 * "broadcast locally by BBC Cymru Wales; Quest and Eurosport in Europe;"- perhaps add more broadcasters that are mentioned by World Snooker?
 * "The player accumulating the highest amount of prize money over the six events receives a bonus of £150,000." - received
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:58, 30 September 2021 (UTC)

Prize fund

 * "The event's total prize fund was £405,000, with the winner receiving £70,000. The player accumulating the highest amount of prize money over the six events receives a bonus of £150,000." - needs verifying by a reliable source
 * DoneBest Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 13:02, 30 September 2021 (UTC)

Early rounds

 * "and required to move up four places to play in the next event," - move up is ungrammatical
 * "World number one Judd Trump defeated Chinese players Zhao Jianbo and Si Jiahui" - needs to be verified by a reliable source
 * The term break can be wikilinked to the appropriate article
 * "Jordan Brown defeated Luo Honghao, Sam Craigie and Alexander Ursenbacher" - same issue as the second point in this section
 * done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 13:05, 30 September 2021 (UTC)

Quarter final-to final

 * "Murphy, the defending champion was defeated 4–5 by Maguire." - missing comma between the words "champion" and "was"
 * "The match lasted three hour" - spelling error
 * "center pocket" - centre
 * "Brown then made breaks of 56, 113 and 59 winning the next five frames to win the match 6–1."- repetition of "win(ning)
 * "having turned professional in 2009;" - not mentioned in the World Snooker source at the end of the sentence this is in
 * "and lead 4–1 after a century break" - led
 * "and showed signs of frustration. Brown made a break of 56 to lead 8–7." - not sure the text highlighted in bold is encyclopedia
 * That is what the source says though Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 13:21, 30 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "Brown 'won the match after a break of 74 in the 17th frame to win 9–8." - won the match 9–8 after a break of 74.
 * completed the rest. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 13:21, 30 September 2021 (UTC)

Tournament draw

 * "Players in bold denote match winners.[10][9]" - refs in numerical order please
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 13:24, 30 September 2021 (UTC)

Century breaks

 * Source "BetVictor Welsh Open 2021 | Centuries" says there were 72 centuries not 73. This figure will need correcting and the extra century not included in the reference deleted if it cannot be verified
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 13:24, 30 September 2021 (UTC)