Talk:2022 Welsh Open (snooker)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: BennyOnTheLoose (talk · contribs) 21:13, 22 May 2022 (UTC)

Copyvio check: Some overlap of common phrases with sources. Mostly OK but I think the following could be reworked: "breaks of 86 and 53 to move within a frame of victory"; final-frame decider at the Welsh Open, more than any other player in the history of the event."; "missed a red with the rest"
 * Looks to be pending a response. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 12:01, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
 * I changed the first, but the other two seem like a WP:LIMITED thing to me.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:52, 1 June 2022 (UTC)

General comments and sources
 * There are a few duplicate links: snooker, 2022 Turkish Masters, James Cahill.
 * snooker (in the sense of not leave a clear shot to the objet ball) is still duplicate-linked. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 12:01, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Done  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:55, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
 * I amended some hyphens to dashes, and did a little general formatting, with the help of scripts.
 * I amended a couple of refs.
 * Some refs are out of order, e.g. [65][66][63]; [10][6] - to be reviewed after other amendments.
 * Shouldn't flagathlete be used at the first mention of each player in the draw? I know they are used in qualifying results, which were chronologically first, but these aren't first in the article.
 * Fixed  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:27, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
 * No harm in adding "Numbers in brackets denote seeded players" in the qualifying section, I think.
 * Done  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:27, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
 * The qualifying results look messy to me. I prefer boxes, but not sure if this is a manual of style issue or something that there is a consensus around; might be fine as it is.
 * I don't think it's been discussed.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:27, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
 * OK as is, in that case. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 12:01, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
 * The three rte.ie refs are all missing the publisher/website.
 * added  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:27, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Inconsistency between livescores.worldsnookerdata.com refs format
 * Done  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:27, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Inconsistency between wst.tv refs format
 * Done  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:27, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
 * "Selby & Zhao knocked out of Welsh Open" - mising publication date and author.
 * Done  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:27, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
 * "Jordan Brown beats Ronnie O'Sullivan in the final frame to win 2021 Welsh Open" - missing author
 * added  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:27, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
 * "Champion Brown loses in first round" - title differs from source, missing publication date. (Which can be worked out from archive date, or got from the live version of the page)
 * Done  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:27, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
 * "Welsh Open 2022 snooker final LIVE – Joe Perry stuns Judd Trump to become second oldest ranking winner of all time" - missing author. Title of the page is different, probably changed since it was accessed.
 * add  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:27, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
 * I checked three Eurosport refs and all were missing authors.
 * I looked at ref 22 and author has not been added, so this probably applies to others too. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 12:01, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
 * I shall have a look through them. Should be no big deal.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:55, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
 * I'm happy with the term "straightforward pot", "easy black" and "lax safety shot" etc. in context here, but guess they might raise questions if this went to FAC.

Format
 * "The Welsh Open began as a ranking tournament in 1992.[1] The 2022 tournament took place" is a bit of a jump.
 * added some details.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:27, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
 * "All matches were the best of seven frames..." - as the 2021 tournament has just been mentioned, maybe something like "For the 2022 edition, all matches were the best of seven frames..."
 * Done  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:27, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
 * "will receive a bonus" - suggest rewording this so no-one has to remember to come back and change it later
 * Reworded  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:27, 1 June 2022 (UTC)

Early rounds
 * "The held-over qualifying matches" - I think "held-over" needs a bit of explanation here and in the lead.
 * added to body. I don't think it needs a massive note in lede.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:27, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
 * "O'Sullivan's involvement in the European Masters final on 27 February.[14] O'Sullivan won the match 4–0" - Could be clearer that it was at the Welsh Open he won 4–0, not in the European Masters final.
 * sure.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:27, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Is there a suitable wikilink target for "tour card"?
 * Reworded. I dislike "Tour Card" for this reason.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:27, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
 * "but made history as the first woman" - I was excited, but "made history" might be overegging it a bit.
 * agreed  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:27, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
 * It's still in the lead. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 12:01, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Removed  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:55, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Could cuegloss "yellow". Don't we normally add "ball" after the colour?
 * Indeed  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:27, 1 June 2022 (UTC)

Last 16
 * Could wikilink "century break" at the first instance.
 * Could cuegloss "pink" and "red"
 * "no Welsh player advanced beyond the round of 16" - the sort of detail that news outlets and Snooker Scene love. Do we need it here, even if it is the Welsh Open?
 * I think it's fine. Done the wikilinks  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:27, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
 * OK. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 12:01, 1 June 2022 (UTC)

Quarter-finals
 * "Robertson required foul shots" - reword to show he needed his oppopnent to foul.
 * Done  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:27, 1 June 2022 (UTC)

Final
 * Could cuegloss "baulk".
 * Could cuegloss "blue".
 * "It was Perry's first ranking title win in the United Kingdom, since he had won his previous ranking title in Thailand" - any context to add about why this is worth commenting on? (If not, it's fine.)
 * removed and linked.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:27, 1 June 2022 (UTC)

Images
 * Rationale provided for the use of the poster seems reasonable. Other pics are CC.
 * Captions and placement are OK.
 * Excellent  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:27, 1 June 2022 (UTC)

Initial comments above,. I'll have another look after your responses. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 16:23, 23 May 2022 (UTC)
 * Sorry for the wait - I have completed the above .  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:27, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Thanks, . Just a couple of minor mop-up tweaks to do, I think. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 12:01, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Should now be all covered  Lee Vilenski  (talk • contribs) 09:08, 2 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Passing for GA, Thanks for your work on the article. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 11:55, 2 June 2022 (UTC)