Talk:2023 Michigan State University shooting/Archive 1

Berkey Hall
Berkey Hall is correct. Guettarda (talk) 04:19, 14 February 2023 (UTC)


 * @Guettarda that is correct 80.197.102.148 (talk) 08:11, 14 February 2023 (UTC)

Extensive criminal history?
The article states the alleged perpetrator has an “extensive criminal history”, but lists mostly driving violations. I believe that should be reworded. Let’s reach consensus on the prose. Juneau Mike (talk) 16:37, 14 February 2023 (UTC)
 * Fixed. Driving offenses are not considered criminal offenses.Juneau Mike (talk) 18:02, 14 February 2023 (UTC)

Shooter's mental health history
Can we find out the shooter's mental health info, ssri use. That would be very pertinent info. 65.94.43.214 (talk) 19:11, 14 February 2023 (UTC)


 * Only if it can be backed up by WP:RS. Love of Corey (talk) 06:34, 15 February 2023 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 16 February 2023
in the section about aftermath add that Okemos public schools were also canceled for Wednesday Nameismyname (talk) 22:03, 16 February 2023 (UTC)

Not done: please provide reliable sources that support the change you want to be made. PianoDan (talk) 23:12, 16 February 2023 (UTC)


 * @PianoDan The existing source supports Okemos schools, but I'm not sure what the benefit might be of adding to an already extensive list. Everywhere around here closed down. Guettarda (talk) 23:41, 16 February 2023 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 17 February 2023
there is a typo in the 2nd paragraph in the perpetrator section Elisecars727 (talk) 02:27, 17 February 2023 (UTC)


 * Could you be more specific? —Locke Cole • t • c 02:44, 17 February 2023 (UTC)
 * Unclear what specifically is wrong. Reactivate the request if you respond with a specific word/typo you want corrected. —Locke Cole • t • c 05:20, 17 February 2023 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 15 February 2023
On responses, add the fact that Biden’s response came on the 5th anniversary of the Parkland Shooting. 159.115.9.49 (talk) 17:42, 15 February 2023 (UTC)
 * Done. Guettarda (talk) 17:49, 15 February 2023 (UTC)

Sequence of events is confusing
There are now two "second shootings" in the "Shootings" section that need to be resolved: - Fuzheado &#124; Talk 12:35, 14 February 2023 (UTC)
 * "A second shooting was reported at the MSU Student Union"
 * "At 9:26 p.m., police reported a second shooting at IM East, an on-campus gym."
 * @Fuzheado The shooting at the IM was reported by the police on Twitter, but turned out not to be true. Guettarda (talk) 15:32, 14 February 2023 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request
In the "multiple shooting survivors" section, the text mentions multiple individuals having survived the Oxford High School shooting. However, there is no link to the relevant article in that section, or in the "see also" at the bottom of the page. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 160.253.0.7 (talk) 15:20, 15 February 2023 (UTC)


 * It is linked in the previous section. We typically only link once per article. Guettarda (talk) 18:03, 15 February 2023 (UTC)