Talk:2023 Odisha train collision/GA1

GA Review
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Nominator: 11:21, 20 June 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Kiwiz1338 (talk · contribs) 10:29, 21 June 2024 (UTC)

In its current state, it's going to be a failure. I'm willing to hold it if Magentic Manifestations you're ready to fix these issues? Kiwiz1338 (talk) 16:03, 21 June 2024 (UTC)


 * @Kiwiz1338 Thanks for taking it up. Based on your comments, I do not find any major issues that cannot be fixed outright. Will address the concerns and revert accordingly. Magentic Manifestations (talk) 16:15, 21 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Sounds good. Thanks Kiwiz1338 (talk) 16:26, 21 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Hello @Magentic Manifestations, I'll read over it a few more times and try to get another editor to have a look. There may be more issues to resolve before a possible pass. Kiwiz1338 (talk) 17:50, 21 June 2024 (UTC)
 * @Kiwiz1338 I am ok with you taking time going through it if you have concerns or engaging in getting help if not sure. Regarding a second opinion, you would need to request or engage with experienced reviewers specifically asking for help as normally second opinion tags are not addressed, given the huge backlog of GA reviews required in the first place. Magentic Manifestations (talk) 18:04, 21 June 2024 (UTC)

I’ve been asked to have a look over the shoulder:
 * There was a mix of date formats in the prose but given that I have a script that fixes those issues, that’s been dealt with.
 * Some sentences are missing direct articles (a common problem in Indian articles).
 * Is "neighboring" correct Indian English or is it missing a "u"? Also "criticized ".
 * Despite the head-on collision – no, that was not a head-on collision.
 * The lead uses the phrase cancellation of more than 40 trains, while is says at least 48 trains were cancelled. I suggest that the body's prose should be adopted for the lead.

That’s it. I’m happy with the other components of the review.  Schwede 66  20:13, 21 June 2024 (UTC)


 * Thank you @Schwede66. Ping @Magentic Manifestations just to make sure you have seen it. Kiwiz1338 (talk) 21:15, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
 * @Schwede66 Thanks for the additional comments. My take on these comments below:
 * Date format issue has been dealt with. No issues here.
 * Have fixed whatever I can find.
 * Neighboring and neighbouring are both used in Indian English, though neighbouring is preferred (for obviously British reasons!). Have changed it anyways.
 * Modified the sentence to remove the head-on part
 * Yes, it was a miss. Changed it now for consistency.
 * @Kiwiz1338, These have been addressed as well! Thanks! Magentic Manifestations (talk) 09:23, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
 * What about "criticized"?  Schwede 66  10:15, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Changed! Magentic Manifestations (talk) 12:45, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
 * @Kiwiz1338 Hi! Request you to complete the review appropriately. Magentic Manifestations (talk) 10:07, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
 * @Magentic Manifestations I'd add the abbreviation for Odisha Disaster Rapid Action Force next to it in the Emergency response section for consistency. Kiwiz1338 (talk) 10:18, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
 * I'll update my review comment template tommorow as it's getting a little late for me now, cheers. Kiwiz1338 (talk) 10:19, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
 * @Kiwiz1338 Have addressed your last comment as well. Thanks! Magentic Manifestations (talk) 16:26, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
 * @Kiwiz1338 Still awaiting the closure of the review! Thanks! Magentic Manifestations (talk) 14:03, 29 June 2024 (UTC)

1 July 2024 second review
You have fixed the issues raised by Schwede66 and I. Here's the second review following that.

One aspect that could have failed the review the second time was '''5. Stable:''' it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. The reverts seemed to be from the same IP though and the last was 3 days ago.

Thank you Magentic Manifestations for your help getting this article to GA. Kiwiz1338 (talk) 22:16, 30 June 2024 (UTC)