Talk:2024 Rose Bowl/GA1

GA Review
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Nominator: 02:34, 6 July 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 03:06, 19 July 2024 (UTC)

Will review this! Comments will probably be finished in the next 72 hours! Arconning (talk) 03:06, 19 July 2024 (UTC)


 * @PCN02WPS Here are my comments, made some minor copy-edits. Hope they can be addressed! Arconning (talk) 17:38, 21 July 2024 (UTC)
 * @Arconning Everything has been taken care of or responded to! PCN02WPS  ( talk  &#124;  contribs ) 22:33, 21 July 2024 (UTC)

Prose and MoS

 * Mentions of winningest should be replaced with something more formal.
 * Done, using the same language as the DYK hook. PCN02WPS  ( talk  &#124;  contribs ) 22:32, 21 July 2024 (UTC)

Lead and infobox

 * bowl games which concluded, replace which with that.
 * The winner qualified through to the 2024 College Football Playoff, wondering if this should be ...for the 2024 College Football Playoff?
 * Done both. PCN02WPS  ( talk  &#124;  contribs ) 22:32, 21 July 2024 (UTC)

Background

 * No issues, nice work.

Teams

 * regular season, wondering if this should be hyphenated?
 * No, "regular season" is a commonly used noun phrase in college football and is never hyphenated. PCN02WPS  ( talk  &#124;  contribs ) 22:32, 21 July 2024 (UTC)

Game summary

 * After two plays for no gain,, is this an American football term that should be wikilinked?
 * There really isn't a single applicable term for this, all I'm saying is that they did not gain or lose any yardage. I'll reword to make this clearer. PCN02WPS  ( talk  &#124;  contribs ) 22:32, 21 July 2024 (UTC)
 * . Michigan took a knee to run the remaining seconds off of the clock and send the game to overtime., "took a knee", same with preceding comment
 * I linked quarterback kneel at the end of the paragraph about the second quarter but since it's worded differently here I linked it again. PCN02WPS  ( talk  &#124;  contribs ) 22:32, 21 July 2024 (UTC)
 * Tables are formatted properly.

Aftermath

 * Optional. I was wondering if the last could be merged somewhere?
 * Where would you suggest? PCN02WPS  ( talk  &#124;  contribs ) 22:32, 21 July 2024 (UTC)

Images

 * All images are relevant to the article and have proper licensing.

Refs

 * Earwig's okay.
 * Random ref checks: 1, 14, 21, 24, 37, 43, good.
 * I'd like to question the reliability of 29, Football Zebras. If it's reliable, it should probably use it's name rather than the website to follow consistency with the ref layout
 * I haven't had problems with the site in GANs past (see 2021 College Football Playoff National Championship, for example), so I believe it's good. Everything I've found on there has been backed up by other sources including official game statsheets, as well. PCN02WPS  ( talk  &#124;  contribs ) 22:32, 21 July 2024 (UTC)

Misc

 * No ongoing edit war, broad and focused info, neutral.