Talk:23rd Waffen Mountain Division of the SS Kama (2nd Croatian)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Retrolord (talk · contribs) 10:52, 16 February 2013 (UTC)

I'll start this one shortly.  ★ ★ RetroLord★ ★  10:52, 16 February 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for the review. I take issue with a number of your comments on the basis that some of the points you have raised are probably specific to military history articles (ie the way we deal with foreign ranks) and others (including a couple of paragraphs in the background) are straight lifts from an article I successfully took to FA. I will address your points on merit and re-submit. FYI, military is misspelt on your user page. Thanks, Peacemaker67 (send... over) 10:26, 17 February 2013 (UTC)

If you'd like I can reassess it as soon as you nominate it again, just to speed things up for you. And thanks for the warning about my user page. Regards,  ★ ★ RetroLord★ ★  10:37, 17 February 2013 (UTC)


 * I have now addressed almost all of the points listed above. The German rank formatting is as per numerous FA and MILHIST A-Class articles, and I don't intend to change it. Some German ranks are long, but using purely British or American equivalents is often not exact, and it is important that the full rank is provided to ensure the relative and comparative responsibilities are clear. The inclusion of the information about the NCOs shows the extent of the cross-pollination between the 13th SS and its sister division, and I do not believe its inclusion constitutes unnecessary detail.