Talk:270 Park Avenue (1960–2021)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 01:56, 25 August 2022 (UTC)

I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 01:56, 25 August 2022 (UTC)

Sources are reliable. -- Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 15:18, 25 August 2022 (UTC)
 * The image File:270 Park Avenue Photomontage.jpg says it's a derivative work of this, but there seems to be no resemblance between the two.
 * "The Union Carbide Building received mixed criticism during its existence." Don't you mean "mixed reception" -- i.e. some praise and some criticism?  "Mixed criticism" means various kinds of criticism.
 * Suggest redlinking General Bronze; I get 93 hits in the NYT alone.
 * "The site of the plaza was supposed to be part of a northward extension of Vanderbilt Avenue to 49th Street, which the New York Central Railroad had built in 1913 but never deeded to the government of New York City": what had the railroad built in 1913? As written this says it was 49th Street, but that can't be right.
 * "Since there were only six platforms on the upper level that extended to 47th Street." Incomplete sentence.
 * Thanks for the comments @Mike Christie. I have addressed all of these issues now:
 * I removed the image.
 * I changed "mixed criticism" to "mixed reception". I was thinking of two things at once at the time: "criticism" and "mixed commentary", and I combined them.
 * The red link has been added.
 * I clarified that this refers to Vanderbilt Avenue.
 * The sentence has been corrected.
 * – Epicgenius (talk) 21:49, 25 August 2022 (UTC)

Fixes look good; passing. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 21:54, 25 August 2022 (UTC)