Talk:28 cm SK L/40 gun/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Grandiose (me, talk, contribs) 19:30, 7 June 2011 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * Cited, but not added added to the main body.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 03:00, 9 June 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * Hard to summarize a description without simply duplicating material in both sections.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 03:00, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * Done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 03:00, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * Added.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 03:00, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * I agree and have reworked it in line with your suggestions. See how it reads.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 03:00, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 03:00, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
 * OK, that's everything covered. I added a sentence to the lead, although I appreciate the problem. All fine now. (Will pass shortly.) Grandiose (me, talk, contribs) 16:41, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 03:00, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
 * OK, that's everything covered. I added a sentence to the lead, although I appreciate the problem. All fine now. (Will pass shortly.) Grandiose (me, talk, contribs) 16:41, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 03:00, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
 * OK, that's everything covered. I added a sentence to the lead, although I appreciate the problem. All fine now. (Will pass shortly.) Grandiose (me, talk, contribs) 16:41, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
 * OK, that's everything covered. I added a sentence to the lead, although I appreciate the problem. All fine now. (Will pass shortly.) Grandiose (me, talk, contribs) 16:41, 9 June 2011 (UTC)