Talk:29 (Loïc Nottet song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kyle Peake (talk · contribs) 04:53, 18 October 2019 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Target Sony Music Entertainment to Sony Music
 * Move the video from links to infobox
 * "is a song recorded by Belgian" → "is a song by Belgian"
 * Target Sony Music Entertainment to Sony Music
 * "while production was handled by" → "while the production was handled by"
 * ""29" builds to a" → "the track builds to a"
 * "features the singer" → "features Nottet"
 * "The track's autobiographical lyrics" → "The autobiographical lyrics" as it is clear you are ref the track
 * "and also approaches" → "and also approach"
 * "the song's lyrical content" → "the track's lyrical content"
 * Refs 1 and 2 are not needed in the lead
 * You can do this though if there's not enough information to build a section. In this case, it's not worthy creating a "Reception" section, since the reviews are very shallow an there are only two peaks, so I think this should stay.
 * Maybe reception shouldn't be mentioned at all since two reviews is barely any? --Kyle Peake (talk) 18:26, 20 October 2019 (UTC)
 * Removed. Cartoon network freak (talk) 19:07, 20 October 2019 (UTC)


 * "was uploaded onto" → "was uploaded to"
 * "his love interest (played by Fanny Sage) reaching" → "his love interest, played by Fanny Sage, reaching"
 * "Commercially, "29" charted" → "Commercially, the track charted"
 * WikiLink Ultratop on Belgium

Background and composition

 * Target Sony Music Entertainment to Sony Music
 * "on 5 June 2019." → "on 5 June 2019 in various countries."
 * ""29" starts "quiet" and" → "the song starts "quiet" and" as too much usage of the title is bad
 * "parking lot."[9]" → "parking lot".[9]"

Music video

 * "was uploaded onto Nottet's" → "was uploaded to Nottet's"
 * "with Fanny Sage hired" → "with Fanny Sage being hired"
 * "play Nottet's" → "play the role of Nottet's"
 * "in the passenger seat" → "in the passenger seat of the car"
 * "As they both attempt" → "As they make an attempt"
 * "inside the car as in the clip's" → "inside the car as in the video's"
 * "however he is alone as" → "though he is alone, since"
 * "the song and called it a" → "the song, calling it a"

Charts

 * Change peak position to being a sortable header

Release history

 * Territory → Country
 * Give ref own column

Final comments and verdict

 * Think you could add a reception section though there wasn't many reviews for the song, since a section has potential when they are combined with the chart positions? Anyway, good work but for now. --Kyle Peake (talk) 04:53, 18 October 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:41, 20 October 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ good job! --Kyle Peake (talk) 19:29, 20 October 2019 (UTC)