Talk:2 Hours Doing Nothing/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 19:51, 4 December 2020 (UTC)

Basic stuff and comments

 * Archive all archivable sources (recommend using this tool). Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 19:51, 4 December 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 00:21, 5 December 2020 (UTC)


 * Lead is great. Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 19:51, 4 December 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 00:56, 5 December 2020 (UTC)


 * I suggest moving the 3rd reference to the end of the sentence. Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 19:51, 4 December 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 00:38, 5 December 2020 (UTC)


 * The quote from the last sentence in "Summary and production" is from this source, not the one currently being used. Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 19:51, 4 December 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅, source and reference have changed Chompy Ace 00:31, 5 December 2020 (UTC)


 * The following sentences need references (or need references moved to the end of the sentence):
 * "A viewer counted Didit blinking 362 times."
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 00:47, 5 December 2020 (UTC)
 * "Didit originally planned for the video to be only 10 minutes long..."
 * ✅, removed partial sentences that are unneeded Chompy Ace 00:55, 5 December 2020 (UTC)
 * "Several Internet memes were published on Facebook and Instagram."
 * ✅ sentence removed as unnecessary Chompy Ace 00:48, 5 December 2020 (UTC)
 * "...with the number of downloads reaching 10,000 as of early August."
 * ✅, sentence within the Video game adaptation section has removed Chompy Ace 00:52, 5 December 2020 (UTC)


 * The following sentences need rephrasing (since they should all be in past-tense):
 * Change "is shot" to "was shot"
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 00:32, 5 December 2020 (UTC)
 * Change "the video is a sarcastic commentary" to "the video was a sarcastic commentary"
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 00:34, 5 December 2020 (UTC)
 * Change "video is only meant for" to "video was only meant for"
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 00:35, 5 December 2020 (UTC)


 * I suggest removing the "2020 films" category since this really isn't a "film". Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 22:12, 4 December 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅, removed per WP:NOTDEFINING Chompy Ace 00:23, 5 December 2020 (UTC)

, may I ask why is the Adaptation section removed? It is significant to know that the video has been adapted to a game, and it is supported by a reliable source.  Gerald WL  01:05, 5 December 2020 (UTC)
 * It wasn't removed when I started my review. Feel free to bring it back. Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 01:16, 5 December 2020 (UTC)

Surprise! Chompy Ace 02:07, 5 December 2020 (UTC)