Talk:2 States: The Story of My Marriage

Synopsis
I have corrected some minor grammatical mistakes. I think the: Guys i wrote the section because people had to know why this book is rumored to be a sequel to Five Point Someone. --Proteasfanz (talk) 09:57, 24 March 2010 (UTC)

If this is what is deemed as a 'correction' of the grammar, it's a very poor job. This article is very badly written with some glaring errors and is in need of some editing by someone who has some experience. LeoDaVinci (talk) 13:27, 13 October 2012 (UTC)

Citation Added
I have added citation for the fact that the book is based on author's life. Though the citation says nothing more other than the fact he is from punjab and his wife is from tamil nadu, the word "loosely" is nicely coined there. Oasa (talk) 15:00, 24 February 2010 (UTC)