Talk:2nd and 6th Missouri Infantry Regiment (Consolidated)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 07:07, 8 July 2020 (UTC)

Good work as usual. A few comments:
 * suggest "fighting at the Battles of Kennesaw Mountain and Peachtree Creek, the Siege of Atlanta, and several smaller actions."
 * Done


 * I think the company breakdown and commanders info is undue, suggest
 * Done


 * what were the conditions of their parole and were they breaching them by joining this unit?
 * They'd been exchanged by that point, I tried to make that clearer


 * After the this action at the Lattimer House
 * Done


 * once you've introduced the regiment, I'd go with "2nd and 6th Missouri Infantry" thereafter, there is at least one example of 2nd and 6th Missouri Infantry (Consolidated) and 2nd and 6th Missouri Infantry (Confederate)
 * Done


 * The Confederate positions at nd Lovejoy's Station
 * Done


 * The First Missouri Brigade had charged the Union works at least four times
 * Done


 * "During the attack, the military band of the First Missouri Brigade played "Dixie"." and "One officer of the 2nd and 6th Missouri (Consolidated) carried an axe during the charge" seems like romantic trivia to me.
 * Nixed the axe one. Multiple sources mention Dixie, so it seems important
 * This is ok at GAN, but you may need to revisit it at Milhist ACR or FAC, particularly taking into account any Confederate bias in the authors that mention it. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 02:10, 9 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Okay. McGhee, Gottschalk, and SSword mention it. Gottschalk is a bit Confederate sided, McGhee is a regional scholar specializing in the Confederacy (so probably some bias).  I think Sword's neutral, but I may be wrong


 * Brigade commander Cockrell
 * Done


 * Eight C company commanders Wells, Hickey, Parsons, Woodard, Lanier, Moss, Thurmond, and Koontz were among the Franklin casualties.
 * Done


 * "where the men were paroled." parole is duplinked. After the Confederate surrender or before? No mention of the Confederate surrender?
 * I'll need to look in the source.

The unit surrendered at Fort Blakeley, by that point the Confederacy was falling completely apart and various units surrendered at various times
 * You need to add that the Army of Tennessee surrendered on April 26, otherwise we are left somewhat up in the air, as some of these men had been paroled before and went back to fighting. Do we know whether this unit was paroled before or after that date? Do we have a date? Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 02:10, 9 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Just looked it up, parole was in May. I'll add that and the Army of Tennessee surrender date
 * Done with this. I also went ahead and removed the Dixie bit. Hog Farm Bacon 02:52, 9 July 2020 (UTC)

That's it. Placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 07:07, 8 July 2020 (UTC)
 * images and copyvio check are ok
 * This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by acceptably licensed images with appropriate captions. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 02:57, 9 July 2020 (UTC)