Talk:3-Way (The Golden Rule)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 18:02, 28 February 2023 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

(Criteria marked are unassessed)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
 * b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a. (reference section):
 * b. (citations to reliable sources):
 * c. (OR):
 * d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * Pass/fail:

I should be able to complete this one today! --K. Peake 18:02, 28 February 2023 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * The release date needs to be directly sourced in the body
 * Use bullet points instead of hlist per Template:Infobox song
 * Remove comedy from genres since charting on the comedy chart does not inherently make this song that genre
 * Add a comma before the featuring part in prose
 * Make the writing/production sentence the second of the lead instead
 * Remove SNL from brackets when it is already written earlier in the sentence, as that implies this
 * The host role is not sourced; Gaga is only mentioned as being slated to appear
 * "on May 24," → "on May 24, 2011," and make the nervous sentence the one before this
 * Add the genre next to R&B of new jack swing
 * "with additional production from" → "with further production from"
 * Lowercase the Futuristics per MOS:THEMUSIC
 * The lack of understanding does not seem to be what the quote from Gaga sources; reword the "who..." part
 * Place the music video sentence after the reception and accolades ones in the lead, plus follow this with a mention of the live performance
 * "The music video," → "The accompanying music video," with the wikilink
 * "and finds Samberg and Timberlake reprising their roles from that skit" → "that finds Samberg and Timberlake reprising their roles from the skit"
 * "reviews from critics who" → "reviews from critics, who"

Background and writing

 * "portrayed in past" → "portrayed in the past" and remove the brackets in this context, plus add the year(s) of these skits
 * "Speculation only increased when photos of Samberg and Timberlake" → "Speculation increased when photos of the duo"
 * Wikilink music video
 * "The track named" → "The track, named"
 * "written on May 19, with" → "written on May 19, 2011, with" and wouldn't it be better to mention that it was recorded on the following day here instead of the shoot?
 * Lowercase the Futuristics per MOS:THEMUSIC
 * "was written with keeping Lady Gaga in mind since she was set to appear on Saturday Night Live" → "was wrote with Gaga in mind since she was set to appear on SNL"

Composition

 * Audio sample looks good!
 * Add R&B as a genre per the Los Angeles Times
 * ""3-Way"'s premise follows the early 1990s pop duo" → "the premise of "3-Way" follows the early 1990s pop duo of" removing the brackets, plus do something similar for the Gaga part
 * Wikilink threesome
 * Where is the girl quote sourced?
 * Pipe Payless ShoeSource to Payless (footwear retailer)
 * "Gaga's character acknowledges that" → "Gaga's character acknowledges" however, this one quote is not sourced
 * "and that they should follow" → "and they should follow"
 * "on May 23:" → "on May 23, 2011:"
 * The quote needs a speech mark to start it, plus you are using the wrong source here

Reception

 * "received positive reviews" → "were met with positive reviews"
 * "the skit, writing, "Timberlake" → the skit, writing that "Timberlake"
 * "with hilarious results."" → "with hilarious results"." per MOS:QUOTE
 * "impeccable as always,"" → "impeccable as always","
 * "thought gay," he continued." → "thought gay", he continued."
 * "the skit "hilarious" and praised" → "the skit "hilarious"; he praised"
 * "digital short D--- in a Box [sic]."" → "digital short D--- in a Box  [sic]"."
 * "to the track, saying" → "to the track, saying:"
 * "saying that the composition of the track was comparable to that of their previous release" → "saying the composition was comparable to that of the Lonely Island's previous release"
 * "debuted at number 7" → "debuted at number seven" per MOS:NUM
 * Pipe Gaon Download Chart to Circle Chart
 * "a peak of number 3" → "a peak of number three"
 * "while reaching number 1" → "while debuting at number one"
 * Pipe Comedy Digital Tracks to Billboard charts

Music video and live performance

 * "their characters aka "2:30 AM,"" → "their characters known as "2:30 AM,""
 * "of the other's mother (played by" → "of the other's mother, played by" and add, respectively after these
 * "says hi. Jinx!" before" → "says hi. Jinx!", before" with the pipe
 * "as they sing the song's introduction ("yeah yeah yeah" repeated several times)." → "while singing the song's introduction "yeah yeah yeah" repeatedly."
 * "on her boots."" → "on her boots"." per MOS:QUOTE
 * "They are both then seen" → "The two are both then seen"
 * "in a 3-way."" → "in a 3-way"."
 * Shouldn't "I Just Had Sex" be mentioned as the third song of the medley earlier on?

Credits and personnel

 * Pipe audio mastering to Mastering (audio)

Charts

 * See MOS:TABLECAPTION
 * Decapitalize Gaon and pipe to Circle Chart
 * "were with the same suits" → "were in the same suits"

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; that went as I would have desired! --K. Peake 20:50, 28 February 2023 (UTC)


 * Excellent review, ! I think I've addressed everything. The only thing I don't agree is about the overlink in the references. Per MOS:REPEATLINK, it's fine "repeating the same link in many citations". Also, in my opinion, a reference can be read at different times in an article, not in chronological order. Gaga Nutella talk 14:15, 2 March 2023 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, I will let the repeated links slide however there was a duplicate ref for Time that I sorted for you! --K. Peake 08:36, 4 March 2023 (UTC)