Talk:31 October 2023 Jabalia refugee camp airstrike

Mads Gilbert
(Comment copied over from original Jabalia attack article)

I think Wikipedia will lose credibility if it think Mads Gilbert's opinion of the the 31 October bombing is an impartial or important piece of information. There's a one in a trillion chance he would ever NOT label an Israeli attack as a massacre or "mass murder".


 * Do you deny that Israel is clearly guilty of indiscriminate slaughter, which many would consider to be war crimes? 2607:FEA8:A4E1:BC00:F4F3:6CB7:667C:412E (talk) 08:08, 1 November 2023 (UTC)

Whether he is 100% right or not, he is known for his extremist views, such as saying the September 11 attacks were justifiable (later "retracted"). He has been a prominent anti-Israel activist and Hamas ally for well over a decade. 1.129.108.0 (talk) 02:31, 1 November 2023 (UTC)


 * Oh, shut up. Pro-Israel people seem to think that anyone who remotely criticizes Israel's war crimes is an "extremist", and it's getting very boring. As we can see with your nonsense in calling Dr. Gilbert a "Hamas ally" because he refutes IDF propaganda regarding the Gaza Strip. 2607:FEA8:A4E1:BC00:F4F3:6CB7:667C:412E (talk) 08:08, 1 November 2023 (UTC)
 * https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:History/User_talk:1.129.108.0 Hatechecker203 (talk) 08:50, 1 November 2023 (UTC)

Move to: Jabalia massacre?
Unlike other airstrikes, there seems to be more sources referring to this specific bombing as a “massacre” because of the extent of damage and loss of life

https://www.aljazeera.com/amp/news/2023/10/31/dozens-killed-in-israeli-air-attack-on-gaza-refugee-camp-medical-official

https://www.livemint.com/news/world/israel-bombs-jabalia-refugee-camp-in-gaza-in-one-of-the-biggest-massacre-yet/amp-11698766517023.html

https://amp.cnn.com/cnn/2023/10/31/middleeast/jabalya-blast-gaza-intl/index.html

https://www.dawn.com/news/1785306/massive-massacre-al-jazeera-correspondent-at-jabalia-camp-describes-scenes-after-israeli-strike The Great Mule of Eupatoria (talk) 04:16, 1 November 2023 (UTC)


 * First of all, all of the sources you give are quoting Palestinian officials. They've been describing "massacres" by the IDF for the past few weeks, so the word isn't being used with any more gravity than previous airstrikes and/or explosions. The Israelis, as before, describe the casualties as "collateral damage" in the elimination of "mastermind" commander Ibrahim Biari, Hamas assets and accomplices hiding within and under civilian infrastructure. They argue that civilians have been asked to evacuate northern Gaza for several weeks, implying that a military objective had already long been established. This alone would not excuse intentional civilian deaths. Proving that excess civilian deaths were intentional or military objectives did not exist (for example, simply wanting to destroy Gaza morale) requires evidence that is unfortunately very difficult to acquire, especially when it comes to airstrikes in densely populated areas. It's very rare for war crimes to be filmed and narrated via GoPro.
 * Just to clarify, "extent of damage and loss of life" doesn't automatically make something a "massacre". It's the intent that matters. If a man is shooting you at a gas station and you kill him in self defense but blow up the gas station, killing 200 people, it's not a "massacre". It might be selfishly self-preserving or an act of stupidity, but it's not a massacre as in the intended use of the word. 120.18.53.3 (talk) 05:38, 1 November 2023 (UTC)


 * Except for the fact that Israel has openly said that they see all Gazans as "terrorists" and have specifically said that they intend to engage in collective punishment in Gaza. So all you're doing is making excuses for the war crimes of the IDF. 2607:FEA8:A4E1:BC00:F4F3:6CB7:667C:412E (talk) 08:10, 1 November 2023 (UTC)


 * Israel gave a name, doesn’t really mean anything, any Palestinian is Hamas to them. Large killing of civilians in an attack Israel has admitted to being deliberate, as well as sources describing this specific airstrike as a massacre as well as the damage and death toll makes it more different than the other airstrikes The Great Mule of Eupatoria (talk) 06:34, 1 November 2023 (UTC)
 * I don't think you understood the reply to your post?
 * If English isn't your first language, try Google Translate. It works surprisingly well these days for European languages but only so-so for Asian languages (from my experience).
 * For Wikipedia's NPOV guidelines read:
 * https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Neutral_point_of_view 120.17.32.227 (talk) 07:25, 1 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Seems like he understood the previous guy's nonsense just fine. Shame you have to be condescending though.2607:FEA8:A4E1:BC00:F4F3:6CB7:667C:412E (talk) 08:10, 1 November 2023 (UTC)
 * https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:MobileDiff/1182935686 Hatechecker203 (talk) 08:46, 1 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Yes, it's clearly a massacre, but it may take some time for this to be supported (if ever) in reliable sources. The choice of language in such instances often comes down as much to systemic media bias as anything else. Iskandar323 (talk) 09:10, 1 November 2023 (UTC)
 * A massacre has to be intentional. Military operations, especially in densely populated areas may produce collateral damage, whereby civilians are unintentionally killed. For example, NATO bombing of a refugee column in Albania (1999) killing 73 civilians; US planes hitting a shelter in Baghdad (1991) killing 408 civilians...
 * There is no evidence that Israel targets civilians. On the contrary - to reduce casualties Israel asked residents to leave the area of combat to safe zones in the southern portion of Gaza Strip. GidiD (talk) 09:45, 5 November 2023 (UTC)

Two weeks ago
"Israel razes Gaza’s Jabalia camp to the ground" https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ARfSpqGwvfY (Today i see the pictures of this old damages.) --Virtualiter (talk) 04:44, 1 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Three weeks ago: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JpyeqlAqrks --Virtualiter (talk) 05:35, 1 November 2023 (UTC)

Jabalia refugee camp airstrikes should be mentioned in the beginning. --Virtualiter (talk) 13:19, 1 November 2023 (UTC)

Requested move 1 November 2023

 * The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review after discussing it on the closer's talk page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

The result of the move request was: moved. There is a clear consensus to move to 31 October 2023 Jabalia refugee camp airstrike as seen below. (closed by non-admin page mover) Reading Beans (talk) 04:51, 9 November 2023 (UTC)

31 October 2023 attack on Jabalia → 31 October 2023 Jabalia airstrike – Consistent with our other articles about airstrikes in this conflict and previous ones; Hajji Tower airstrike, October 2023 UNRWA school airstrike, Church of Saint Porphyrius airstrike, Al-Ansar Mosque airstrike, 2023 Erez airstrike. It is also a better descriptive title, as the target of the attack is complicated; it is better to simplify it to "airstrike" and allow the article to explain how the airstrike took place in the camp, but the IDF say that they were targeting a Hamas commander and an underground tunnel complex. This also matches how reliable sources tend to describe the strike; for example, the BBC says An Israeli air strike is reported to have killed dozens of people at Jabalia refugee camp in northern Gaza, while CBS says Israel carried out airstrikes and ground operations Tuesday in the Jabaliya refugee camp in northern Gaza, targeting what it called a Hamas "terrorist stronghold." BilledMammal (talk) 12:20, 1 November 2023 (UTC)


 * Support as specifying that it is an airstrike can help to decrease misunderstandings and just make it simpler as the word "attack" is somewhat vague. Scarlet Strange (talk) 14:28, 1 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Support "airstrike" is specific and descriptive and is also less likely to lead to the unverified conclusion that the airstrike was intended to target noncombattants there. SPECIFICO talk
 * Support, per the reasoning explained here. It's more specific and consistent with other articles about individual airstrikes. XTheBedrockX (talk) 17:17, 1 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Suppot per above Parham wiki (talk) 17:54, 1 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Support per above- more specific etc. Yadsalohcin (talk) 18:42, 1 November 2023 (UTC) oppose as nom'd, and support alternative below ('2023 Jabalia refugee camp airstrikes') Yadsalohcin (talk) 23:21, 1 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Support '31 October 2023 Jabalia refugee camp airstrike' Yadsalohcin (talk) 08:57, 2 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Support replacing "attack" with "airstrike", the sources support it, but the rest of the title is no good, so oppose as nom'd, and propose alternative: 2023 Jabalia refugee camp airstrikes Support 31 October 2023 Jabalia refugee camp airstrike
 * The attack was on Jabalia refugee camp, which is outside the city of Jabalia. "Jabalia refugee camp" is much more common than "Jabalia" in sources (in many sources "refugee camp" is more prominent than "Jabalia", see ), and including the term "refugee camp" would also help the recognizability and naturalness (ease of searching); readers are more likely to be looking for "refugee camp airstrike" than to remember a foreign city name and spell it right, especially if it is spelt inconsistently by sources (NYT says "Jabaliya", BBC and the Guardian say "Jabalia", CNN says "Jabalya")
 * There were two strikes, one yesterday, one today (see, so the date is now incorrect. The month and day need to go, and "airstrikes" should be plural.
 * DFlhb (talk) 19:04, 1 November 2023 (UTC) edited 08:40, 2 November 2023 (UTC)
 * There is already a page for the different airstrikes in Jabalia - they have occurred since the beginning of Israeli retaliation in the war. The October 31 one is notable due to just how many people it killed and garnering more international attention than previous attacks in Jabaliya. On the inconsistency in spelling, it comes from the Arabic letter ي, which produces a ya or iya sound. Jebiguess (talk) 23:18, 1 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Thanks for pointing that out, and my apologies, I hadn't seen that page. Date should be kept. I've struck parts of my vote. Fully aware of the issues of transliteration, that's part of my rationale. DFlhb (talk) 08:31, 2 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Support. It was an airstrike, and falls in line with other articles. Jebiguess (talk) 23:07, 1 November 2023 (UTC) oppose in favor of 31 October 2023 Jabaliya refugee camp airstrike per VR's comment.


 * Support per above.  // Timothy :: talk  23:55, 1 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Propose 31 October 2023 Jabalia refugee camp airstrike. That would be consistent with Jabalia refugee camp airstrikes, and it is true that Jabaliya refugee camp is outside of Jabaliya. Most sources use "Jabaliya refugee camp"/"refugee camp" (as opposed to just Jabaliya) in their titles: CNN, CBS News, PBS, BBC News, Bloomberg, Al-Arabiya etc.VR talk 00:07, 2 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Supporting this proposal as a possible alternative due to the given evidence. XTheBedrockX (talk) 06:40, 2 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Support per reasoning above. Jebiguess (talk) 21:10, 2 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Support this, more accurate. Selfstudier (talk) 13:41, 3 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Support: the "refugee camp" variant as more accurate/precise, per VR. Iskandar323 (talk) 14:14, 3 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Support adding "refugee camp" for consistency with Jabalia refugee camp airstrikes. Yeoutie (talk) 17:50, 7 November 2023 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

Stated → Claimed
Why did you switch this over? Per MOS:CLAIM, we shouldn't be using words like "claimed" to attribute, but instead should use words like "stated", as the former calls the statement's credibility into question, while the latter is usually neutral and accurate. BilledMammal (talk) 12:54, 1 November 2023 (UTC)


 * @BilledMammal: During this war, as is the case in all wars, neither side has been entirely truthful, so as far as anyone's credibility during this war goes, his statement was only a claim. I wasn't aware of MOS:CLAIM though, so thanks for notifying me. I've seen "claimed" used quite often, and I'm wondering if this is acceptable to use when a source describes a statement as such. Nythar  (💬-🍀) 18:08, 1 November 2023 (UTC)
 * If RS express scepticism in addition to use of the word then sure but ordinarily prefer said, stated, etc. Selfstudier (talk) 18:10, 1 November 2023 (UTC)

The article states that at least 47 Palestinians were killed, but the "Casualties" field in the box on the right on the beginning of the article says "100+ killed"
This discrepancy should be revised to "47+" in the "Casualties" field in the box on the right, as stated in the various references. Also, one shouldn't give Al Jazeera as a reliable reference, for it is not an independent media outlet, but a medium for spreading the Qatari government's propaganda. Thisissparta12345 (talk) 15:17, 1 November 2023 (UTC)

If there differing figures, just leave the infobox field empty for now, and explain the situation in the article. Selfstudier (talk) 18:31, 1 November 2023 (UTC)

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 1 November 2023
Please add the following to the International Reactions section (if appropriate)


 * 🇩🇪 Germany's foreign minister Annalena Baerbock emphasized Israels right of self-defense and stated that Hamas was consciously using people in the camp as human shields. AmbitiousAmphibian (talk) 23:53, 1 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Done.VR talk 00:10, 2 November 2023 (UTC)

Misquote
, could you self-revert this edit? (edit summary: conform to statement in cited source)

You changed our text targeted a "military stronghold" to targeted a "Hamas stronghold"

This is how the source uses the term "stronghold": which it says is a Hamas "stronghold," (paraphrased quote) and The object was a "military stronghold" [...] the military said (verbatim quote) Our text conformed to the source, now it does not. DFlhb (talk) 06:12, 2 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Hello. Actually, my initial thought about that text was that these were scarequotes and that the quotation marks should be removed. Then when I looked at the source I saw the quotation marks in the source. I now see what you're saying, but I still think that the quotation marks in our text, much briefer and with less context than the source article, strike the reader as scarequotes. What's your opinion about removing the quotation marks? From what I see, the weight of RS, e.g. this one do not use quotation marks when reporting the Israeli justification of the bombardment. SPECIFICO talk 12:05, 2 November 2023 (UTC)
 * It seems NPR was just wrong. The NYT piece you link doesn't mention a stronghold at all. The BBC presents the stronghold stuff as part of a separate operation that involved groups troops, not air strikes, and happened in the city itself, not the refugee camp. WaPo doesn't talk about a stronghold. I'll self-revert to what the section said before my "stronghold" addition. DFlhb (talk) 12:32, 2 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Actually, NPR was ambiguous; the first paragraph heavily implies the strikes targeted a stronghold, though they do later mention the (alleged) stronghold was in western Jabalia (which isn't where the refugee camp is). My fault for not being more careful. DFlhb (talk) 12:44, 2 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Looking at more sources, I think that sentence and section needs more content reflecting additional sources and discussion of the various claims about the target. The immediate solution would be to remove the scarequotes, but this would technically run afoul of 1RR, so I suggest we workshop better and more detailed text here on talk. Among other things, saying that the journalist could not verify the existence of tunnels or Israel's claim of a Hamas command center doesn't add any specific information. As often happens in controversies and concerns about wartime events, such verification is not accessible to the press and has the facts and circumstances take years for investigators to assess. SPECIFICO talk 12:32, 2 November 2023 (UTC)
 * The current version of the text looks much better and NPOV to me. I have no further concerns about this bit. SPECIFICO talk 14:41, 2 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Same DFlhb (talk) 15:21, 2 November 2023 (UTC)

first three citations are incomplete
The first three references/citations on this Wikipedia article are incomplete, and need additional information added. Thank you. 133.106.140.85 (talk) 07:13, 2 November 2023 (UTC)


 * DFlhb (talk) 09:45, 2 November 2023 (UTC)

Categories
Currently, Category:Mass murder in Gaza in included. Per WP:CATPOV, I don't think that is appropriate. BilledMammal (talk) 14:50, 2 November 2023 (UTC)


 * Agreed. Andreas JN 466 17:31, 4 November 2023 (UTC)
 * I've removed the cat. CATPOV doesn't support it. Andreas JN 466 23:09, 5 November 2023 (UTC)

Quote box
What are editors' views of this bit of content? It has gone in and out of the article a couple of times now and was most recently deleted here: - An eyewitness described the scene:"'Children were carrying other injured children and running, with grey dust filling the air. Bodies were hanging on the rubble, many of them unrecognized. Some were bleeding and others were burnt. ... I saw women screaming and confused. They didn’t know whether to cry for losing their children or run and look for them, especially since many children were playing in the neighborhood.'"

-- Personally I think we should restore it. There is an immediacy to it that any paraphrase will merely water down. It is very well sourced (CNN), and CNN actually used part of this quote as the title of its article. Views? Andreas JN 466 17:26, 4 November 2023 (UTC)
 * The horrors in Gaza are abundantly described and referenced on Wikipedia. Beyond the horrors of war, which are infinite, the significance of this particular strike is the uncertainty and conflicting narratives about its cause and consequences. Emphasizing the already evident horrors without giving WEIGHT to the significant factors in this incident fails NPOV. SPECIFICO talk 21:34, 4 November 2023 (UTC)
 * An IDF official confirming that they launched an airstrike at a refugee camp is an example of ? I'm not exactly sure what you mean by this. XTheBedrockX (talk) 01:46, 5 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Yeah, what uncertainty? Two, 2000-pound bombs were dropped with predictable ramifications in a densely crowded refugee camp. Iskandar323 (talk) 19:38, 9 November 2023 (UTC)
 * So we shouldnt cover the atrocities by Hamas and other groups on October 7th in the detail that we do for the same reason I gather?  nableezy  - 02:28, 5 November 2023 (UTC)
 * I'm in favour of restoring the quote. An airstrike getting launched at a refugee camp that kills 50+ and injures hundreds will inevitably causes a huge amount of suffering. I see nothing wrong with including the eyewitness account to illustrate that. XTheBedrockX (talk) 01:47, 5 November 2023 (UTC)
 * I think we're better off summarizing and describing the attack; adding the quote raises issues with WEIGHT as mentioned by SPECIFICO. BilledMammal (talk) 02:22, 5 November 2023 (UTC)
 * I am in favor of restoring the quote. The quote in itself is pretty NPOV as far as describing the attack, and portrays really good imagery that I don't think we can replicate without minimizing or exaggerating the scene. Jebiguess (talk) 19:30, 9 November 2023 (UTC)

What exactly is the weight concern here? CNN gave this a ton of weight, and currently we have no description of the aftermath besides the IDF spokesman claiming this is all so terrible because Hamas uses human shields.  nableezy  - 02:26, 5 November 2023 (UTC)
 * We have no quote box about the Israeli rationale, nor should we. We should focus on article text that meets the dictums of NPOV.<b style="color: #0011FF;"> SPECIFICO</b> talk 02:41, 5 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Fine, take it out of a quote box. And make it a normal quote in the text, if thats the issue. <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap"> nableezy  - 02:45, 5 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Per all the above, the issue is WP:WEIGHT, not only the formatting.<b style="color: #0011FF;"> SPECIFICO</b> talk○
 * Ok, again, what is the WEIGHT issue then? Is there some other viewpoint on the aftermath that is not expressed? <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap"> nableezy  - 03:01, 5 November 2023 (UTC)
 * This is how the body of the article currently starts:

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 * The director for civil defense in Gaza told Al Jazeera that Israel dropped six US-made bombs in the area. Pictures of the aftermath showed several large craters amid destroyed buildings. The New York Times quoted an analyst who said the damage appeared consistent with Joint Direct Attack Munitions that Israel uses. Satellite imagery showed that an area of at least 2500 m2 was "completely flattened" in the strikes, according to the NYT. The New York Times'' and experts it consulted concluded that at least two 2,000-pound bombs were used.
 * ''According to IDF officials, Israel targeted the space between buildings to destroy an underground tunnel complex and said that the collapse of the tunnel network caused the foundations of nearby buildings to collapse in turn causing the collapse of those buildings.

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 * There is not a single mention here that anyone died in the attack. Moreover, we are told that the IDF aimed its bombs at the streets between the buildings, as though the collapse of the buildings – or rather the complete pulverisation of an entire city block – was completely unexpected by the IDF (which even the cited interview makes clear it was not). This is not what the sources describing the attack and the resulting scene focused on, what they gave the most weight. The sources focused on the carnage and the civilian deaths, so any description of the attack must describe these prominently. --Andreas JN 466 09:16, 5 November 2023 (UTC)
 * +1 Selfstudier (talk) 11:20, 5 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Indeed, people are claiming we must not include mention the people who were directly impacted by the attack, only the official story for why it was a necessary and precise strike that was wholly justified. The sources have focused on the impact to the civilian population in in the refugee camp. We even dont include refugee camp in the title. <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap"> nableezy  - 22:14, 5 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Thanks. I've restored the quote, though without the box format. Andreas JN 466 23:08, 5 November 2023 (UTC)
 * As you may not have seen, I just objected to this proposal above in this thread. Please self-revert and continue to pursue consensus here on talk <b style="color: #0011FF;"> SPECIFICO</b> talk 23:56, 5 November 2023 (UTC)
 * But you have not said why. You have simply asserted a WEIGHT issue. What is the weight issue? We had nothing on the casualties or the impact on the civilians in the refugee camp. Why is it a weight violation to include that? <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap"> nableezy  - 00:03, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
 * It was my judgment that present consensus here in this discussion is against you. The weight is established by sources that are explicit about the distress of local civilians. This is not just CNN. BBC: "Video footage and photos showed hundreds of people searching the wreckage afterwards. "We're filling bags with children," cried one man, holding up a small white cloth bag covered in blood." Reuters reported having obtained a video of a boy in Jabalia crying in despair: "I was standing here when three bombings happened, I carried a body and another decapitated body with my own hands. God will take my vengeance." (This was during the Nov. 4 strike on Jabalia.) That video is shown here on the Irish Times website. Etc. Andreas JN
 * Yes, clearly it's your judgment that your view is correct. But we look to either uninvolved assessment of consensus or clear uncontested consensus, taking account of all views. The WEIGHT issue is clear. One view is that this was a wanton, needless attack on civilians for collective punishment, a war crime. The other view is that this was a strike on underground tunnels and Hamas leadership situated beneath the surface. Yes there was terrible civilian suffering. That is what happens in all wars. The emphasis on the civilian suffering without commensurate article text as to the Israeli statements that they were targeting legitimate Hamas targets frames this section with UNDUE non-NPOV emphasis. I thought that was clear from the previous comments, but now it is elaborated somewhat. At any rate, it is not our practice for editors to declare consensus for their own views and cut short talk page workshopping of consensus recognized by those participating on talk.<b style="color: #0011FF;"> SPECIFICO</b> talk 21:11, 7 November 2023 (UTC)
 * @SPECIFICO From the Office of the United Nations High Commissioner for Human Rights:
 * "'Given the high number of civilian casualties [and] the scale of destruction following Israeli airstrikes on Jabalia refugee camp, we have serious concerns that these are disproportionate attacks that could amount to war crimes'" XTheBedrockX (talk) 22:46, 7 November 2023 (UTC)
 * I mentioned that view, above.<b style="color: #0011FF;"> SPECIFICO</b> talk 22:59, 7 November 2023 (UTC)
 * The main problem here is that Israel is not a neutral third party; they are an admitted participant. If reliable, third-party sources say that what Israel did "could amount to war crimes", those claims should probably hold more weight than the Israeli military's justification for it. XTheBedrockX (talk) 00:14, 8 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Yes, that's understood. But we still report denials or alternative assertions of involved parties when reported by Reliable Sources. Emphasis could amount to war crimes. Let's just try to describe the events -- determination of war crimes is complex and will only happen long afterward. At this time, it is just a label, rather than a description. There is no doubt that the suffering is horrific. "war crime" does not add to that description.<b style="color: #0011FF;"> SPECIFICO</b> talk 00:54, 8 November 2023 (UTC)
 * If we agree that the suffering is horrific, then there should be no issue with including the eyewitness accounts of the airstrike. XTheBedrockX (talk) 01:06, 8 November 2023 (UTC)
 * I disagree for reasons stated above. We can describe it without the long quote and with due weight to the Israeli statement about the target, also not in a direct quote.<b style="color: #0011FF;"> SPECIFICO</b> talk 01:41, 8 November 2023 (UTC)

466 00:45, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Agree with using a quote, at least until we can find a couple of suitable images or videos for this article. The same reason we use images to educate the reader, we can also use quotes of eye witness accounts. The quote used is entirely neutral and I don't see any weight concerns. I don't think there is a single source out there that is disputing that children didn't die in this event (regardless of who is to be blamed).VR talk 06:38, 7 November 2023 (UTC)


 * I can't see an issue with using a quote given huge, titular weight by CNN. They obviously thought it conveyed something meaningful. Iskandar323 (talk) 19:46, 9 November 2023 (UTC)

Bringing up after 7 months: Jabalia massacre
Several sources, including all Arabic sources, including Arab correspondents of RS such a sky news use مجرة, or massacre, because of intentional bombardment that Israel dismissed as “casualties of war” and the sheer amount killed.

https://www.aa.com.tr/en/europe/scottish-leader-apologizes-for-world-s-inaction-over-jabalia-massacre/3039563

https://www.livemint.com/news/world/israel-bombs-jabalia-refugee-camp-in-gaza-in-one-of-the-biggest-massacre-yet/amp-11698766517023.html

https://www.middleeasteye.net/news/israel-palestine-war-jabaliya-camp-scores-killed-air-strikes

https://airwars.org/civilian-casualties/ispt0783-october-31-2023/

https://www.aljazeera.net/amp/news/2023/11/1/إسرائيل-ترتكب-مجزرة-جديدة-بمخيم

https://www.skynewsarabia.com/amp/middle-east/1677870-معارك-جباليا-لماذا-تريد-إسرائيل-السيطرة-مخيم-الثورة؟ The Great Mule of Eupatoria (talk) 14:27, 29 May 2024 (UTC)
 * While it is obviously a massacre, this is far from the WP:COMMONNAME in WP:RS, especially in English-language RS, so I don't think there's a sound policy basis to change the title. I think you can however justify mentioning that it's commonly characterized as a massacre in the body or lead of the article. JDiala (talk) 20:16, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
 * English language RS sometimes do not even refer to Israel as the perpetrator and refer to Palestinians being killed passively (have died), so no way they would describe a massacre as a massacre
 * The Arabic مجزرة جباليا ٢٠٢٣ yields several results as a common name for the attack (literally “2023 Jabalia massacre”) while the attack itself defines every aspect of a massacre, 6 tonnes of bombs dropped on civilians for one militant the IDF could not prove even existed or was killed The Great Mule of Eupatoria (talk) 02:27, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
 * We can have our criticisms of the Western media's portrayal of the war but ultimately this site does consider them WP:RS. I'm just not sure there's a policy basis for your proposed change. Even Al-Jazeera English, a more even-handed source, does not seem to usually describe the attack as a massacre (except when quoting Palestinians who describe it as such). I'd suggest inserting something in lead like "the attacks are widely described as constituting a massacre in the Arab world" (or some more elegant way to say the same thing) which is something we can more easily support via policy. JDiala (talk) 08:42, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
 * In this case there are some sources here linked in Arabic, explicitly referring to it as a massacre (some are RS I believe). Reliance solely on English sources can cause issues and downplay these atrocities like it has done on several Wikipedia pages, limiting Israeli deliberate attacks on civilians as just “attacks”.
 * if necessary, would “or the Jabalia massacre” work in the lead The Great Mule of Eupatoria (talk) 15:55, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
 * It's a descriptive title with no English common name that has been established, so there is slightly more latitude for absorbing other language input, but at the same time, just 2023 anything isn't going to work, because there were lots of massacres in Jabalia in 2023, so it would still need more precision. Iskandar323 (talk) 17:31, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
 * What would you suggest moving it to (assuming Wikipedia finally calls Israeli crimes for what they are)? I would’ve said October 31 Jabalia massacre, but Israel followed with a second deadly airstrike against Jabalia the next day, and Israel has not provided any justification aside from an imaginary commander they claimed was there The Great Mule of Eupatoria (talk) 06:39, 8 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Really not sure. The current title is unwieldy, but it's true to the descriptive language in most sources. I did double check just to make sure. It might be best left pending further RS. Iskandar323 (talk) 17:45, 8 June 2024 (UTC)

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 14 July 2024
everal = several 2603:8000:D300:3650:FDB5:6307:5019:6270 (talk) 07:12, 14 July 2024 (UTC)
 * ✅ Corrected, thank you! – macaddct1984 (talk &#124; contribs) 11:21, 14 July 2024 (UTC)