Talk:330 West 42nd Street/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:29, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:29, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Basic stuff and comments

 * Infobox and lead look good.
 * "the The Orion" "The Orion"
 * "walls of central entrance" - is a "the" missing?
 * "Art Deco style" "Art Deco-style"
 * "approved a move" "approved a motion"
 * "which led" "that led"
 * "Steel work" should be one word.
 * "less than $15 million, less than" - repetitive?
 * "ten percent the $175 million" "ten percent of the $175 million"
 * "through the building" "throughout the building"
 * Check for citation ordering issues.
 * Wall Street Journal The Wall Street Journal
 * Mark references from The New York Times with "|url-access=limited".
 * Mark references from The Real Deal New York with "|url-access=subscription".
 * Wikilink Paul Goldberger, Christopher Gray, Grace Glueck, David W. Dunlap, Jon Pareles, Ada Louise Huxtable, and Lewis Mumford.

Progress

 * Thanks. I've done all of these. Epicgenius (talk) 18:52, 2 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Passing the article but there are still a few ordering issues. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 19:25, 2 July 2021 (UTC)