Talk:3D t-shirt

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i am new to wiki. Please could you help on citation and clean up. I do not know what is wrong with this. How can I fix this. Your help is too long and hard to understand. Please could you give me a quick answer what should be done? Thanks a thousand.


 * The problem with said article is...

Sincerely, Logical2u (Wikibreak) 22:07, 18 June 2006 (UTC)
 * 1) The only site you link to is Moving Tees (Note now there is a second one) ... sites do not assert the statements in the article. The guidelines usually suggest three places for sources on any article that can be verified.
 * 2) The article is written in the format of a giant billboard for 3-D Tshirts, and to be direct, Moving tess, which is not permitted under wikipedia guidelines unless the site is proven to be "notable" or some other random AFD cliché of the week. Which normally means at least one citation regarding the site in question from another, non-biased, website. Most normally use Alexa rank, Google Page hits, and sources to judge article. What I mean here is that your article may be set up to be deleted on the grounds of "Notability" and "advertisement". My suggestion is that you try and find some way to prove the "notability" and "importantance" of your article.
 * 3) The article in itself seems both small and unusually limited for an article on 3-D T-shirts, making me (and therefore likely other editors) suspect this page was written as an advertissement.
 * 4) You used 3 different spellings of T-shirt.
 * 5) Your link is a little messed up.
 * 6) Removing tags while questioning them is not exactly something that looks "good" to most wiki-editors.

Adamsami 01:56, 19 June 2006 (UTC) Thanks for your comment,
 * 1) first of all, i am sorry for the act of removing tags as I don't know how to correct it.  Did not mean to override the decision made by other wiki-editors.  But I have corrected the point mentioned by the other editors and she did not responded
 * 2) as for 3d t-shirt, there are many confusions and people put different things all lump to 3d t-shirt.  thus i believe a more clear definition is needed (that is why we need an encyclopedia, right? )
 * 3) I did not put movingtee before, but the other editor said I need sources, so I put is on, I think this is a new product and not so many company is making it.  I will try to find more website
 * 4) the movingtee has alexa rank of 50,584,  does it meet your standard of "notable"?  please advise

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 * Well, I'm not the guy that makes all the "NN" deletions. I try to stay out of it. Here, some thoughts.

Sincerely, Logical2u (Wikibreak) 20:58, 19 June 2006 (UTC) PS: Please sign at the BOTTOM of posts, some people might interpret at the top as the "TO:" line.
 * 1) Well, a more clear definition IS needed, but the way it is currently written, while better, is still grammatically incorrect (Painful to read mb?) and still reads like a bit of an ad. While I can't tell you how to combat that completely, striking the This brings t-shirt to a new level of expressionism line and replacing it with "These dual images can display more indepth sentiments regarding specific topics".
 * 2) Also strike cap, hat and purse. This is about T-shirts, not caps, hats, and purses.
 * 3) Try to expand the article a bit.
 * 4) See if there is a news article on these new T-shirts. That would really help improve the article.