Talk:3rd Congress of the Indonesian Democratic Party/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kingsif (talk · contribs) 22:07, 15 January 2020 (UTC)

Opening Kingsif (talk) 22:07, 15 January 2020 (UTC)

Style

 * Level of English poor throughout, including lead. To the point I can barely understand it, and don't understand what some parts are trying to say.
 * Lead about the right length
 * On structure:
 * 'Nominations' is a very vague header and should be written sentence style, i.e. Nominations for PDI chairman (same goes for 'Opening', 'Candidates', 'Announcement')
 * 'Reaction' should be its own section, of which 'Formation of CEC' would presumably a subsection
 * Fail things to work on from a structural perspective - detailed comments on writing would be too long and unnecessary, as it needs completely rewriting

Coverage

 * Lots of background detail, maybe too much?
 * On the other hand, there seem to be some acronyms and people mentioned with no introduction - what are these things?
 * Probably a good amount of detail on the event, though hard to tell
 * Needs work

Illustration

 * Suitable image of new chairman, and table
 * I can't find any context for the Sabam Sirait image, so I don't know
 * Both photos PD

Neutrality

 * No idea

Stability

 * History fine
 * Pass

Verifiability

 * I don't know of the reliability of Indonesian sources, nor do I speak the language. I've asked for help at the Indonesia project here.
 * There are inline citations

Copyright

 * Two PD images
 * Can't check offline foreign language text myself

Overall
The level of English gives this a quick fail - it can't be understood, if I were reviewing this as a new page I would suggest it goes to Draft or at least tag it with a translation template. Kingsif (talk) 22:23, 15 January 2020 (UTC)