Talk:400 Madison Avenue/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:30, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:30, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Basic stuff and comments

 * Infobox and lead look good.
 * "Just prior to" "Before" (less wordy)
 * Remove the comma after "of a window".
 * "for the purpose of" - extremely wordy so reword.
 * "which found" "that found"
 * "During October 1928" "In October 1928"
 * "a $11.5 million" "an $11.5 million"
 * Sort categories in alphabetical order.
 * That's it here:
 * Images are free-to-use.
 * Article is stable.
 * It's also broad in its coverage.
 * Great work.

Progress

 * Thanks. I've done all of these. Epicgenius (talk) 15:45, 4 July 2021 (UTC)