Talk:41st Guards Rocket Division/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 00:47, 8 November 2017 (UTC)

Will take this one. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 00:47, 8 November 2017 (UTC)


 * Lead and infobox;
 * Link "68th Anti-Aircraft Artillery Division" "216th Rocket Brigade"; even if they are red links
 * The existence of those units is covered in the body and would be a self link if they were linked.Kges1901 (talk) 18:08, 17 November 2017 (UTC)


 * Intercontinental ballistic missiles from there; remove initial capital
 * Done.Kges1901 (talk) 18:08, 17 November 2017 (UTC)


 * Per MOS:FLAGICON, remove thumbnails and icons from the infobox
 * Done.Kges1901 (talk) 18:08, 17 November 2017 (UTC)


 * Section 1;
 * What is "RGK"? Never mentioned before
 * Done.Kges1901 (talk) 18:08, 17 November 2017 (UTC)


 * "AA" has to be defined in the braces on the first mention of "Anti-Aircraft"
 * Done. Kges1901 (talk) 18:08, 17 November 2017 (UTC)


 * and was commanded by -> under the command of
 * Done. Kges1901 (talk) 18:08, 17 November 2017 (UTC)


 * January and February 1945 -> January–February 1945
 * Done. Kges1901 (talk) 18:08, 17 November 2017 (UTC)


 * In February and March -> In February–March
 * Done. Kges1901 (talk) 18:08, 17 November 2017 (UTC)


 * 910 of its soldiers
 * Done. Kges1901 (talk) 18:08, 17 November 2017 (UTC)


 * two (Brusov and Andryushok) were made Heroes of the Soviet Union; also please be clear whether the above count includes these two as well or not
 * Done. Kges1901 (talk) 18:08, 17 November 2017 (UTC)


 * Section 2;
 * introduction of Intercontinental ballistic missiles; remove the initial capital, and link the entire phrase, you've missed the "s" in the ending
 * Done. Kges1901 (talk) 18:08, 17 November 2017 (UTC)


 * Colonel Konstantin Glushich; why a red link has been given to this, a colonel is notable.
 * All RVSN generals have pretty detailed biographies available and Glushich was later promoted to Major General. Kges1901 (talk) 18:08, 17 November 2017 (UTC)


 * Images OK, no plagiarism found.
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 15:06, 17 November 2017 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 13:23, 19 November 2017 (UTC)
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 13:23, 19 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 13:23, 19 November 2017 (UTC)