Talk:45th Street station (BMT Fourth Avenue Line)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 23:37, 16 April 2020 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  23:37, 16 April 2020 (UTC)


 * Last three sentences of the lead all begin with "The station". Maybe change it to some other phrase?
 * "The station was also renovated in 1970." Renovated in which way?
 * Not really much to say: the tiles were changed and the platforms were extended. The first part was common for renovations of that time, but the second part is quite unique. epicgenius (talk) 13:42, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Not really much to say: the tiles were changed and the platforms were extended. The first part was common for renovations of that time, but the second part is quite unique. epicgenius (talk) 13:42, 17 April 2020 (UTC)


 * Ref 8 doesn't say that the approval was from Appellate Division of the Supreme Court of New York, unless I missed something.
 * Ref 9 needs page numbers.
 * Ref 10 needs.
 * Preferably clipped if possible.
 * Same for Ref 3.
 * And Refs 34 and 35.
 * ✅ all. epicgenius (talk) 13:42, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
 * And Refs 34 and 35.
 * ✅ all. epicgenius (talk) 13:42, 17 April 2020 (UTC)


 * "490 feet (150 m) to 530 feet (160 m)" Ref 12 says 495.
 * Ref 13 needs.
 * Ref 15 needs date format fixed.
 * "in preparation of the construction of platform extensions" This should belong at the end of the sentence.
 * "8-by-16-inch (200 by 410 mm)" Would centimeters be a better choice?
 * Shouldn't the 1970 renovation belong in the same section as the other renovations?
 * It was the same as the 1968-1970 renovation which already is in the history section. I will fix that shortly. epicgenius (talk) 13:42, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
 * I would put the reference for each service right next to the service mentioned (after the punctuation), instead of putting all of them at the end of the sentence.
 * ✅ epicgenius (talk) 13:42, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Ref 29 needs date format fixed.
 * Shouldn't the 1970 renovation belong in the same section as the other renovations?
 * It was the same as the 1968-1970 renovation which already is in the history section. I will fix that shortly. epicgenius (talk) 13:42, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
 * I would put the reference for each service right next to the service mentioned (after the punctuation), instead of putting all of them at the end of the sentence.
 * ✅ epicgenius (talk) 13:42, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Ref 29 needs date format fixed.

Mostly just references. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  04:39, 17 April 2020 (UTC)

FYI, I am aware of that epicgenius will be fixing parts of the article while you're still observing Passover, Kew Gardens 613. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  04:53, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
 * I am available again so I can address any other outstanding issues. Thanks for taking this up.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 23:35, 17 April 2020 (UTC)