Talk:4 Intimate Nights with Beyoncé/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: AJona1992 (talk · contribs) 02:34, 28 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * "was released as from November 21, 2011." replace "as from" to "on"


 * Fashion and stage
 * Was this copied from the source? "Tina Knowles-penned metallic dress showed off her curves and demanded the audiences attention once she is seen on stage"


 * Concert
 * Delink Michael Jackson
 * "past Destiny's Child hits," borders WP:OR
 * "reveales that she wanted to write a song" sentence is in both present-tense and past-tense tone, pick one only
 * No need for the Windows retro quotes on Edge of Seventeen
 * "which contained both men and women fliping their to" flipping what?
 * Delink "1+1" (second instance)
 * "before following a heavily choreographed version of" can you further explain on what it took for the songs' dance to be labeled "heavily choreographed"


 * Critical reception
 * Delink Jay-Z


 * Broadcast
 * Delink Walmart
 * "Worldwide as from" what?
 * "in the US and worldwide" just say worldwide

Please fix these issues. Best, Jona yo!  Selena 4 ever  23:55, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
 * All ✅ except delinking Walmart. It's the first time it's linked in the entire article. My love is love (talk) 09:18, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Now passing the article great work. Best, Jona yo!  Selena 4 ever  20:50, 5 July 2012 (UTC)