Talk:4 in the Morning/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: HĐ (talk · contribs) 05:32, 21 March 2016 (UTC)

I am reviewing this article. Comments may arrive after three days. Simon (talk) 05:32, 21 March 2016 (UTC)

GA review

 * Lead
 * "consisting in" → of ✅
 * "their love" → "her love" is more preferable here ✅
 * "however" → semi-colon or full stop ✅
 * "charting inside the top 20" → reaching the top 20 ✅


 * Background
 * The caption of the sample is not a sentence, so the full stop is redundant here ✅
 * "starting" → from ✅
 * "the song has as its main instrumentation..." → problem ✅
 * "having a midtempo beat" → separate this into an independant sentence ✅


 * Critical reception
 * This section seems a bit overquoted. Try to paraphrase some reviews. ✅


 * Commercial performance
 * "The song was more successful outside North America" → seems a bit incomplete. I suggest it be merged with another sentence ✅
 * "... However, it was her lowest..." → This sentence does not contrast with the information given beforehand ✅
 * "somewhat better" → "somewhat" is redundant ✅


 * Credits
 * Again, that is not a sentence ✅

Enough at this point — Simon (talk) 12:10, 21 March 2016 (UTC)
 * I made your suggested changes; thanks once again! Carbrera (talk) 04:07, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
 * Passing this article. Great job! Simon (talk) 10:37, 22 March 2016 (UTC)