Talk:4th Pennsylvania Infantry Regiment/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 22:45, 4 May 2020 (UTC)

Criteria
1. Prose ✅

2. Verifiability ✅

3. Depth of Coverage ✅

4. Neutral ✅

5. Stable ✅

6. Illustrations ✅

7. Miscellaneous ✅

Comments
1.
 * Link Colonel to Colonel (United States)
 * Done


 * Can we get McDowell's rank in the lead? I've taken several Civil War battle articles through GAR, and it's a frequent request to include ranks.
 * Done


 * "Engagements	American Civil War" - This parameter is usually used to list battles, not the overall war
 * Done

Union Army" - Do both of these need listed in the infobox? It's a touch redundant
 * "	United States Army
 * Only Union then, after all they were volunteers and not regulars


 * Link the Odd Fellows
 * Done


 * Link Harrisburg
 * Done


 * Link the various ranks in the formation article to the articles specifically for that rank in the US Army.
 * Done


 * Don't need to ink Montgomery County in the table, it's linked in the text paragraph above it
 * Done


 * Link companies at first mention in the text
 * Done


 * Consider linking Philadelphia, I don't know how well known this is internationally. Same with Baltimore
 * Done


 * Link steamer
 * Done


 * Link 2nd Lieutenant. Also, go ahead and spell out Second, because it seems to be spelled out more in military sources, unless the abbreviated 2nd Lt. is used
 * Done


 * Link Confederate at first mention
 * Done


 * Link Brigadier General to Brigadier General (United States)
 * Done


 * "In the preliminary movements of the First Battle of Bull Run, the division left camp on the Old Fairfax Road, arriving at Sangster's Station late on 18 July" - I'd consider linking to the campaign rather than the First Battle of Bull Run here, as the campaign is more the topic than the battle in the march to Centreville
 * Done

2.
 * Refs 6 and 9 need via parameters for newspapers.com
 * Done

3.
 * Do you think it would be appropriate to include a couple sentences towards the beginning about the start of the Civil War?
 * Have added a brief mention of Fort Sumter

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That's it for the first go-over, I'll give it another look after these are responded to. Placing on hold. Hog Farm (talk) 04:11, 5 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Passing. Hog Farm (talk) 16:27, 5 May 2020 (UTC)