Talk:500 Club/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:51, 28 August 2016 (UTC)

Will review this. MWright96 (talk) 08:51, 28 August 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * "An imitation waterfall surrounded by imitation exotic vegetation stood in the back." - reptition of imitation ✅
 * US should be United States as seen in the infobox ✅

History

 * "In 1942 Paul" - needs a comma ✅
 * "whose tab was always on the house." - sounds informal ✅

Architecture and fittings
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 * "and an imitation waterfall surrounded by imitation exotic vegetation stood in the back." - same point as in the lede

Acts

 * "1940s through 1960s" - 1940s through to the 1960s ✅
 * "5AM show at the 500 Club-the last performance of the Rat Pack there." - The longer hyphen is needed ✅
 * Link Internal Revenue Service ✅

Nice work from you and the other major contributors. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 14:52, 28 August 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your quick action . Article can now be promoted to GA. :) MWright96 (talk) 16:11, 28 August 2016 (UTC)