Talk:500 Fifth Avenue/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 14:15, 24 March 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's all I have, nice read. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 16:01, 25 March 2021 (UTC)
 * On other similar articles, I think you link facade.
 * "constructed on Fifth Avenue in the " overlinked.
 * "Shreve Lamb & Harmon Associates" in infobox missing comma after Shreve. Also slightly different link in the prose.
 * ""resulted in a ... resulting in the " repetitive.
 * And then "different zoning ... different designs"
 * I think you could justifiably link penthouse.
 * "special Fifth Avenue zoning district in 1929, new buildings on Fifth Avenue within" could you replace the second "Fifth Avenue" with "the street" or something?
 * "included fast elevators" how fast is "fast"?
 * I rephrased this, since I couldn't find a source that actually specified the elevator speed, but "fast" was a direct quote. Epicgenius (talk) 20:06, 25 March 2021 (UTC)
 * "well-lit office units, ... well-lit office " repetitive.
 * "659,122 square feet " not quite what it says in the infobox.
 * The infobox is off by a square meter or so. Epicgenius (talk) 20:06, 25 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Link brownstone.
 * "at 11-17 West" en-dash.
 * "at 27-29 " ditto.
 * Several other such address number ranges follow, check 'em all.
 * "corner lot development" hyphenate corner-lot
 * ✅ all.
 * "become the Salmon Tower Building,[10] which" overlinked.
 * "to cost $2.35 million " etc. inflate.
 * "the zoning ordinances" that could be linked several paragraphs previously.
 * "including setbacks and" overlinked.
 * "was demolished.[32] The demolition " repetitive.
 * "Similar to the Empire State Building nine blocks" overlinked.
 * "which designed both buildings" I think you've said they designed 500 Fifth a couple of times already.
 * "and steel contractor McClintic-Marshall Co. The steel contractor" repetitive.
 * Link derrick.
 * "was largely overlooked" by whom?
 * "and over ten" over seems odd here, what about "at least" or "more than"?
 * I've reworded to say merely that there were several. Epicgenius (talk) 20:06, 25 March 2021 (UTC)
 * "Radio's New York City FM station" overlinked.
 * "at 508-514 Fifth" en-dash, just as a reminder...
 * "way.[43][18][a] The" order.
 * "was demolished.[32] The demolition " repetitive.
 * "Similar to the Empire State Building nine blocks" overlinked.
 * "which designed both buildings" I think you've said they designed 500 Fifth a couple of times already.
 * "and steel contractor McClintic-Marshall Co. The steel contractor" repetitive.
 * Link derrick.
 * "was largely overlooked" by whom?
 * "and over ten" over seems odd here, what about "at least" or "more than"?
 * I've reworded to say merely that there were several. Epicgenius (talk) 20:06, 25 March 2021 (UTC)
 * "Radio's New York City FM station" overlinked.
 * "at 508-514 Fifth" en-dash, just as a reminder...
 * "way.[43][18][a] The" order.
 * "was largely overlooked" by whom?
 * "and over ten" over seems odd here, what about "at least" or "more than"?
 * I've reworded to say merely that there were several. Epicgenius (talk) 20:06, 25 March 2021 (UTC)
 * "Radio's New York City FM station" overlinked.
 * "at 508-514 Fifth" en-dash, just as a reminder...
 * "way.[43][18][a] The" order.
 * "at 508-514 Fifth" en-dash, just as a reminder...
 * "way.[43][18][a] The" order.
 * "way.[43][18][a] The" order.
 * Thanks for the review again. I've resolved all these issues, though I did find a few missing details that I've added to the page now. Epicgenius (talk) 20:06, 25 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Jolly good. I fixed a couple of errant hyphens, but good to promote, nice work. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 20:42, 25 March 2021 (UTC)