Talk:500 Park Avenue/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:29, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:29, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Basic stuff and comments

 * "similarly to the" "similar to the"
 * "reaches to the curb" "reaches the curb"
 * Remove the comma after "from the 1980s".
 * "nearly-full-height" "nearly full-height"
 * "different stories of building" "different stories of the building"
 * Remove the hyphen between "anodized-aluminum".
 * "guiderails" should be two words.
 * "soffit which extends" "soffit that extends"
 * "empty space" sounds weird. Both words basically mean the same thing.
 * "partitioned hall was" "partitioned hall were"
 * "similar to in the" - reword.
 * Remove the comma after "Great Depression".
 * Remove the comma after "move to the Pepsi-Cola Building".
 * "had a large amount of" "had a number amount of"
 * "through third floors" - reword.
 * Wikilink articles for reporters from The New York Times.

Progress

 * Thanks. I've done all of these. Epicgenius (talk) 22:21, 2 July 2021 (UTC)