Talk:53rd Street station (BMT Fourth Avenue Line)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 10:09, 12 April 2020 (UTC)

Comments That's all I have. On hold. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:39, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Infobox:
 * Zip code ref?
 * ✅ epicgenius (talk) 23:52, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Bus ref?
 * ✅--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Rank ref?
 * ✅--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "a few " doesn't seem particularly encyclopedic.
 * "and subsequently modified" relevance?
 * "n June 22, 1915 as" comma after 1915.
 * ✅--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "June 18, 1906 after " comma after 1906.
 * ✅--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "plan for the line in October and November 1907" approved in two separate months?
 * "As part of negotiations" sentence has " and ... and ..." which is a little clunky.
 * "was recommended. This recommendation" repetitive.
 * "its Chief Engineer" no need for caps?
 * ✅--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "contracts for ... was awarded " were?
 * ✅--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Could link BMT Sea Beach Line?
 * ✅--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "on June 22, 1915 as" comma after 1915.
 * ✅--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "53rd Street opened" ->" The 53rd Street station....
 * ✅--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "$633,000" etc, inflate.
 * ✅--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "85 feet (26 m)[13] to the south,[16] " -> "85 feet (26 m) to the south,[13][16] "
 * ✅--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "2015—2019 " should be an en-dash, not an em-dash.
 * ✅--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "March 27, 2017 for " comma after 2017.
 * ✅--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
 * " reopened on September 8, 2017,[25] ahead of schedule.[26]" -> " reopened ahead of schedule on September 8, 2017.[25][26]"
 * ✅--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
 * In the Station layout, 45th and 59th Street are overlinked.
 * Could you fix this when you have a chance? Thanks.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
 * As is side platform.
 * Could you fix this when you have a chance? Thanks.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ epicgenius (talk) 16:40, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "and a few rush-hour " see before.
 * "were installed.[citation needed]" speaks for itself.
 * ✅--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "mosaics[26]" move ref to end.
 * ✅--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
 * " Brooklyn Daily Eagle" is a newspaper, should be in italics.
 * ✅--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Check for consistent link of publishers (e.g. MTA is sometimes linked) in refs.
 * ✅--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "mosaics[26]" move ref to end.
 * ✅--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
 * " Brooklyn Daily Eagle" is a newspaper, should be in italics.
 * ✅--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Check for consistent link of publishers (e.g. MTA is sometimes linked) in refs.
 * ✅--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
 * , thanks for the comments. I think Kew Gardens 613 has done most of these. I have done the station layout queries. Can I ask that you hold off on promoting for a few days (at least until he comes back)? I would like to nominate these all as part of a single DYK. epicgenius (talk) 23:11, 14 April 2020 (UTC)


 * Due to Passover, I won't be able to do any editing from tonight until Thursday evening at the earliest. I am still committed to addressing your concerns with the article. Thanks for your patience and stay safe.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 23:15, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
 * No problem at all. Chag pesach sameach, and stay safe too.  See you when I see you.  The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 06:38, 15 April 2020 (UTC)

, let me know when you're good for a re-review. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 18:13, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
 * would you be fine if TRM did a re-review? epicgenius (talk) 23:52, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Absolutely! Thanks.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 10:13, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
 * , I think all of the issues have been resolved here. Have you had a chance to look at the 59th Street station page yet? epicgenius (talk) 16:35, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Happy with this, so promoting. No, I haven't looked at 59th yet, but I plan to get onto it soon.  The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 18:52, 18 April 2020 (UTC)