Talk:55 Wall Street/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 19:58, 28 May 2020 (UTC)

Criteria
1. Prose

2. Verifiability

3. Depth of Coverage ✅

4. Neutral ✅

5. Stable ✅

6. Illustrations ✅

7. Miscellaneous

Comments
1.
 * Link cruciform to Cruciform
 * "The original structure, with its dome, was the most[10]" - The most what?
 * Oops. I have fixed it. epicgenius (talk) 16:41, 29 May 2020 (UTC)
 * " it is composed of the original three-story building and a four-story addition" - That's an odd way to phrase it, since that only adds up to seven stories
 * That was supposed to be 5 stories, so I fixed it. epicgenius (talk) 16:41, 29 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Link Subtreasury at the first mention, not the second
 * "Four years later, the New York City Landmarks Preservation Commission designated the building's exterior as one of the city's earliest official landmarks.[" - "the building" can be read as 399 Park instead of 55 Wall, because the previous several sentences are about 399 Park
 * "Four years later, the New York City Landmarks Preservation Commission designated the building's exterior as one of the city's earliest official landmarks.[" - "the building" can be read as 399 Park instead of 55 Wall, because the previous several sentences are about 399 Park
 * "Four years later, the New York City Landmarks Preservation Commission designated the building's exterior as one of the city's earliest official landmarks.[" - "the building" can be read as 399 Park instead of 55 Wall, because the previous several sentences are about 399 Park

2.
 * NYCL nos. need citations
 * The years of the listings are cited, but the exact dates are not.
 * "55 Wall Street: A Working Landmark. Citibank. 1979." - Don't know that linking the URL is any helpful, because it says it is not available online for copyright reasons
 * For ref 1, is there a way to get the URL to the specific page instead of the search page?
 * "55 Wall Street: A Working Landmark. Citibank. 1979." - Don't know that linking the URL is any helpful, because it says it is not available online for copyright reasons
 * For ref 1, is there a way to get the URL to the specific page instead of the search page?
 * For ref 1, is there a way to get the URL to the specific page instead of the search page?

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7.
 * Both external links are dead
 * Thanks for the review. I have fixed all the issues. epicgenius (talk) 17:57, 29 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review. I have fixed all the issues. epicgenius (talk) 17:57, 29 May 2020 (UTC)