Talk:55th (West Lancashire) Division/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Catlemur (talk · contribs) 16:58, 24 October 2020 (UTC)

I will begin the review shortly.--Catlemur (talk) 16:58, 24 October 2020 (UTC)


 * Add Categories: Military units and formations disestablished in 1919 and 1919 disestablishments in the United Kingdom.
 * Added EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 02:02, 29 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Break ref 55 into into separate ones.
 * Separated EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 02:02, 29 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Use a comma instead of and in ref 163, for the sake of consistency.
 * Done EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 02:02, 29 October 2020 (UTC)
 * with the aggressive German Empire→ Remove aggressive, I would argue that all empires at the time were aggressive to a certain degree.
 * Done EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 02:02, 29 October 2020 (UTC)
 * What was the division's strength at formation?
 * I have added an extra line to state what the expected establishment was, and that it was not achieved across the board. I have not found seen a source stating what the division actually achieved (closest being what is the article stating how far below establishment it was). EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 02:02, 29 October 2020 (UTC)
 * After a period out of the line resting→After a period of resting out of the line--Catlemur (talk) 19:37, 26 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Changed EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 02:02, 29 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Wikilink creeping barrage
 * Link added EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 02:02, 29 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "the 165th&nbspBrigade"
 * Fixed EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 02:02, 29 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Throughout the article yards are converted to miles in some cases but not in others. This should be done consistently.
 * Updated to just meters. EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 02:02, 29 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Is it comrades' association or Comrades Association?
 * "comrades' " is the term used by the source. EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 02:02, 29 October 2020 (UTC)
 * practise→practice
 * British English verb EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 02:02, 29 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Some image captions end in a full stop while others do not. This should be done consistently.
 * I have added some, where I believe they are appropriate. Some of the captions are not full sentences, and shouldn't have a period. EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 02:02, 29 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Who's Who. London: A & C Black. 1910. → This source is not cited a single time in the article.
 * Updated, so it should now show in the references. It was previously used, but showed as "WW".

Thank you for your review. I have attempted to address the various points you have raised above.EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 02:02, 29 October 2020 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail: --Catlemur (talk) 18:45, 29 October 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail: --Catlemur (talk) 18:45, 29 October 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail: --Catlemur (talk) 18:45, 29 October 2020 (UTC)