Talk:59th (Staffordshire) Infantry Division/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 20:29, 11 July 2019 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:29, 11 July 2019 (UTC)
 * No DABs, external links OK
 * Images properly licensed
 * In what ways was a motor division weaker than a normal infantry division?
 * I have expanded the sentence to further clarify.EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 17:55, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
 * As a result of the evacuation, the division, proper, did not leave Britain. If it had been alerted to leave, you need to say so. Otherwise this sentence doesn't make sense
 * I have reworded, does this work?EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 17:55, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
 * First World War vintage hyphen between War and vintage and here large scale attack and here first phase objectives
 * Hyphens addedEnigmaMcmxc (talk) 17:55, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
 * 132nd Brigade, during the Battle of France remove the comma
 * removedEnigmaMcmxc (talk) 17:55, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
 * British 61st divisions capitalize divisions
 * fixedEnigmaMcmxc (talk) 17:55, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
 * The 59th Division supported comma after division
 * addedEnigmaMcmxc (talk) 17:55, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
 * In more than one place, you haven't capitalized battalion, forex 5th battalion
 * I believe I have added thisEnigmaMcmxc (talk) 17:55, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
 * following day, United States's First Army "the American" reads better
 * AmendedEnigmaMcmxc (talk) 17:55, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
 * Capitalize the first B in bailey bridge
 * AmendedEnigmaMcmxc (talk) 17:55, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
 * Link squadron--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:19, 31 July 2019 (UTC)
 * Added link.
 * Thanks once again for the reviewEnigmaMcmxc (talk) 17:55, 3 August 2019 (UTC)