Talk:59th Street station (BMT Fourth Avenue Line)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 14:52, 16 April 2020 (UTC)

Comments That's it, on hold as usual. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 19:23, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Any reason not to link 59th Street and Fourth Avenue?
 * 59th Street (Brooklyn) is a red link. I linked Fourth Avenue. epicgenius (talk) 20:30, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "on June 22, 1915 as " comma after 1915.
 * "to be ADA-accessible between" see previous commentaries, you use ADA here before explaining to us what it means.
 * Ferry is noted in the infobox but not in the prose.
 * "was also renovated" vs infobox which says that hasn't completed yet.
 * "on July 1, 1907, and the PSC approved the plan" -> "on July 1, 1907, which approved the plan"
 * " its Chief Engineer to" no need for caps (just check the 53rd St review to see if I miss anything!)
 * "June 22, 1915 as" comma after 1915.
 * "for $345,021" inflate (and round to 1,000s of bucks)
 * "$6,585" likewise.
 * "Bay Ridge—95th Street" to me that looks like an em-dash, should be an en-dash.
 * Non-breaking space between 55.2 and million. Check others.
 * "Street Level	Exit/Entrance" -> Street level Exit/entrance.
 * Island platform is overlinked.
 * "This part-time exit[33] is unstaffed" odd ref placement, move to end.
 * Explain HEET before using it.
 * , and BTW, this was a case of RAS syndrome. epicgenius (talk) 20:30, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "between platforms.[35][30]" ref order.
 * "Notable places nearby" interesting, what makes them "notable" and what's "nearby"? I.e. what's the inclusion criteria for this?
 * Generally, if they had articles and were within 2 blocks. epicgenius (talk) 20:30, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "one can see tunnel stub headings" not a travel guide. Write encyclopedically.
 * "150 feet and" convert.
 * " of some sort of space beyond" of a void beyond.
 * "Portions of what was to be two additional..." single sentence unreferenced para.
 * " canceled in 1925.[44][45][43]" ref order.
 * Spaced hyphen in ref 37 should be an en-dash.
 * Avoid SHOUTING in ref titles (I blame the NYT).
 * ✅ Me too. epicgenius (talk) 20:30, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Explain HEET before using it.
 * , and BTW, this was a case of RAS syndrome. epicgenius (talk) 20:30, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "between platforms.[35][30]" ref order.
 * "Notable places nearby" interesting, what makes them "notable" and what's "nearby"? I.e. what's the inclusion criteria for this?
 * Generally, if they had articles and were within 2 blocks. epicgenius (talk) 20:30, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "one can see tunnel stub headings" not a travel guide. Write encyclopedically.
 * "150 feet and" convert.
 * " of some sort of space beyond" of a void beyond.
 * "Portions of what was to be two additional..." single sentence unreferenced para.
 * " canceled in 1925.[44][45][43]" ref order.
 * Spaced hyphen in ref 37 should be an en-dash.
 * Avoid SHOUTING in ref titles (I blame the NYT).
 * ✅ Me too. epicgenius (talk) 20:30, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
 * " canceled in 1925.[44][45][43]" ref order.
 * Spaced hyphen in ref 37 should be an en-dash.
 * Avoid SHOUTING in ref titles (I blame the NYT).
 * ✅ Me too. epicgenius (talk) 20:30, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Avoid SHOUTING in ref titles (I blame the NYT).
 * ✅ Me too. epicgenius (talk) 20:30, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ Me too. epicgenius (talk) 20:30, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review. I have done these as usual. epicgenius (talk) 20:30, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Okeydokes, this is fine. You missed one (Street Level, Entrance/Exit) but I amended that myself.  All is good. Literally. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 09:19, 19 April 2020 (UTC)