Talk:660 Fifth Avenue/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 16:39, 10 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Follow MOS:ORDER and add alt text to every image.
 * "Fifth Avenue were" "Fifth Avenue was"
 * "been be" - typo?
 * "surrounded the atrium on all sides" "surrounded the atrium"
 * "of –th's lobby, along" - reword and remove the comma after "lobby".
 * Don't use colons in the sentence starting with "another advantage".
 * "work site" should be written as one word (both times).
 * "to paid off" "to pay off"
 * Add a serial comma after "Colony Capital".
 * "demanding investigation" "demanding an investigation"
 * "April2017" "April 2017"
 * "half of required" "half of the required"
 * Add a hyphen between "two thirds".
 * "Brookfield announced as a $400 million renovation" - reword
 * "During 2011" "In 2011"
 * "campm" - typo?
 * "Dr Raven Sable" "Dr. Raven Sable"
 * Wall Street Journal The Wall Street Journal
 * Mark references from The New York Times with "|url-access=limited".
 * Mark references from The Wall Street Journal with "|url-access=subscription".
 * Wikilink reports from The New York Times who have wiki-articles.
 * Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 01:55, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
 * , thanks. I have done all of these. Epicgenius (talk) 16:11, 12 July 2021 (UTC)