Talk:69 Squadron (Israel)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:49, 19 August 2011 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * Done, lead expanded, added location for refs where available. Poliocretes (talk) 12:55, 26 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Cites not normally required in lede unless making statements or claims not backed up by the main body; don't think that's the case here. I combined the first two paragraphs to improve flow.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:01, 28 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Right, I removed all cites from the lead, save for one which references a quote not repeated in the body. Poliocretes (talk) 09:04, 14 September 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * Done. Poliocretes (talk) 12:55, 26 August 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * Done. Poliocretes (talk) 12:55, 26 August 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Done. Poliocretes (talk) 12:55, 26 August 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail: