Talk:7:15 A.M./GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Buffbills7701 (talk · contribs) 01:06, 8 January 2014 (UTC)

Comments

 * "Mary Margaret is seen reading The Mysterious Island by Jules Verne, which is a book also featured in TRON: Legacy, a film written by Horowitz and Kitsis." Even though they are both by the same creators, what does the part about TRON: Legacy have to do with 7:15 A.M?
 * This is sourced to ABC's website, so it seemed notable to include it.  Ruby  2010/  2013  04:26, 8 January 2014 (UTC)


 * "He felt that it was "the strongest episode of the series since Rumpelstiltskin’s first fairyback..." Fairyback isn't a word, and the link to Desperate Souls doesn't tell me what fairyback means, nor why the link should be there.
 * Fairyback is not my word, but the reviewer's. I have tweaked the mention of "Desperate Souls".  Ruby  2010/  2013  04:26, 8 January 2014 (UTC) I have removed that part of the quote and changed it to "flashback."  Ruby   2010/  2013  04:28, 8 January 2014 (UTC)


 * "Ralph Hemecker directed the hour." What does this sentence mean?

Decision
After reviewing the article, I have decided to put this on hold for a week. It's mainly referencing that needs work. buffbills7701 01:06, 8 January 2014 (UTC)
 * I have made the changes per your comments. Everything in the article is sourced to the following citation (this includes IGN, TV by the Numbers, etc.). I have repeated the citations in case that's what you were looking for.  Ruby  2010/  2013  04:26, 8 January 2014 (UTC)
 * Thank you for reading the citations. This article passes. buffbills7701 13:17, 8 January 2014 (UTC)