Talk:7 Summers/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 16:15, 26 January 2023 (UTC)

I will get on with this straight away! --K. Peake 16:15, 26 January 2023 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Wouldn't soft rock be more appropriate than easy listening under genres in the infobox per the comp section?
 * "and Josh Osborne and it" → "and Josh Osborne, and it" but write this out in the body in prose since everything in the lead has to be
 * "on the album however following a demo version of the song" → "on the album however, following a demo version"
 * "he decided to include it on the album." → "he decided on inclusion."
 * Change to second single because otherwise it implies a different type
 * Why is soft rock listed as an influence when the body sources it as a genre?
 * "Wallen sings of a lost love of his and" → "Wallen sings of his lost love" also, the title suggestion is not directly sourced in the body
 * "7 Summers received generally positive reviews" → ""7 Summers" received positive reviews" per the body
 * Add a comma after music critics
 * "Moi's production and the overall mood of the track." → "Moi's production, and its overall mood."
 * Italicise Time and change 7th to seventh per MOS:NUM
 * "The song debuted number one" → "The song debuted at number one" plus this needs to be written out in the body
 * "after Garth Brooks (under the persona of Chris Gaines) did so in 1999." → "after Garth Brooks did so as Chris Gaines in 1999."
 * Write the certification out in prose, also add sentences for the short film and the live performances

Background

 * "what would become the songs" → "what would become the song's"
 * "he announced the song would be released" → "he announced it would be released"
 * Mention the writers and producers somewhere here
 * "the full version"." → "the full version."" per MOS:QUOTE

Composition and lyrics

 * "by soft rock bands such as" → "by soft rock bands such as the" on the img text with the wikilink
 * "and bittersweet quality in the song that would" → "and bittersweet quality that would"
 * "chords,[5] and layered guitars meant to give the song a maximalist element," → "chords,[5] layered guitars meant to add a maximalist element,"
 * "groove" and a "breezy," → "groove", and a "breezy,"
 * "are "nostalgic" "bittersweet" "wistful"" → "are "nostalgic", "bittersweet", "wistful","
 * "from East Tennessee (Wallen)"" → "from East Tennessee", referring to himself."
 * "indicating that a second chance with" → "indicating a second chance with"

Release and reception

 * "on August 14, 2020 as" → "on August 14, 2020, as"
 * This sentence is quite messy; italicise the album title, mention the release date separate for when it was released not the song and add the refs for all the info
 * "Upon its release the song gained" → "Upon its release, the song was met with"
 * "pack a gentle wallop"." → "pack a gentle wallop."" per MOS:QUOTE
 * "Allie Clouse of The Knoxville News Sentinel deemed it" → "Allie Clouse of the Knoxville News Sentinel deemed the song"
 * "would described the song as "having imagery" → "described the song as having "imagery"
 * Remove the introduction to Moi
 * Last para looks good!

Short film

 * Img looks good!
 * "with Wallen fearing that" → "while he fears that"
 * "In the film after failing to make the big leagues Wallen" → "In the film, after failing to make the big leagues, Wallen"
 * "to community college and by Wallen reminiscing" → "to community college, as well as by him reminiscing"
 * "and the cinematic nature of the film." → "and its cinematic nature." but is three refs enough for this?
 * "tease Wallen's upcoming second studio album (Dangerous: The Double Album), with Wallen stating" → "tease Dangerous: The Double Album, with him stating"
 * "a January 8th, 2021 release," → "a January 8, 2021 release,"
 * For the last para, [19][20] should only be invoked at the end

Commercial performance

 * "on the Global Apple Music chart." → "on the global chart."
 * "at number six on the" → "at number six on the US"
 * The Voice part is not sourced
 * "at #3 on the Rolling Stone Top 100," → "at number three on the Rolling Stone Top 100," with the pipe per MOS:LINK2SECT
 * "Wallen's first single to" → "becoming Wallen's first single to"
 * "driven by social media and" → "driven by TikTok and"
 * The move country forward quote is not sourced and if you can, italicise the Los Angeles Times
 * The source/title describes Wallen as moving Country into the 21st century while primarily focusing on the song.


 * [22] should solely be at the end of the first sentence

Live performance

 * Retitle to Live performances
 * "Wallen performed the song on Saturday Night Live to" → "Wallen performed the song on his Saturday Night Live debut to" per the source
 * Either remove the "promote the album" part or add that he performed it along those other tracks
 * "In his 2022, The Dangerous Tour, the song would typically be the 5th song" → "In his 2022 The Dangerous Tour, the song would typically be the fifth one" per MOS:NUM

Personnel

 * Retitle to Credits and personnel
 * Remove or replace Genius per WP:RSP (you are citing a lyrics page)
 * Use so there is the right space between credits and personnel

Charts

 * See MOS:TABLECAPTION and split the year-end tables

Certifications

 * See MOS:TABLECAPTION

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; the sources are the main problem here. --K. Peake 20:01, 26 January 2023 (UTC)
 * @Kyle Peake I believe I have fixed everything, let me know if I missed anything. Newtothisedit (talk) 03:05, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, everything has been covered properly here! --K. Peake 07:19, 27 January 2023 (UTC)