Talk:7th Field Battery, Royal Australian Artillery

Feedback from New Page Review process
I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Please rewrite the offending sentences in your own words.

Kudpung กุดผึ้ง (talk) 03:56, 22 September 2019 (UTC)

I actually did write the whole article in my own words. My source was probably a similar source to that used by the writer of the Army page. I started with the information from Royal Australian Artillery Association of Western Australia Inc, and checked various details via Trove the Australian National Library online Archive. I did refer to the Army document as well, but I tried to avoid copying either web page. — Preceding unsigned comment added by SimonFoley (talk • contribs) 14:13, 22 September 2019 (UTC)

Feedback from New Page Review process
I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Thank you ;).

Kudpung กุดผึ้ง (talk) 06:44, 28 September 2019 (UTC)