Talk:8888 Uprising/Archives/2012/June

Cleanup, anyone?
Good article and needed -- however, it needs grammatical and stylistic cleaning. For example, the word "exasperated" was used when "exacerbated" was meant; I wonder about the sentence "Around this time, former Prime Minister U Nu and retired Brigadier General Aung Gyi also re-emerged onto the political scene in what was described as a 'democracy summer' when many former democracy leaders returned." -- should that be "democracy SUMMIT?" I also am not familiar with the history, so I cannot judge the accuracy or bias of the article. Anyone who has more time and familiarity with the subject than I -- please edit this page! Subitopiano (talk) 03:40, 3 June 2012 (UTC)