Talk:9.0: Live/GA1

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And please leave me a note when done. Cheers, —Giggy 07:03, 11 July 2008 (UTC)
 * "9.0: Live is the first live album released by American metal band Slipknot. It was released on 1 November, 2005 by Roadrunner Records" - can you not use released twice? maybe just "first live album by American band..."?
 * Done
 * "The album was recorded during the band's world tour in support of their third studio album Vol. 3: (The Subliminal Verses) from 2004 to 2005." - commas around the album title, delink the years
 * Done
 * Every sentence in the lead starting with "the album" isn't pretty...
 * Done
 * Rolling Stone needs italics throughout (magazine; MOS:ITALICS).
 * Done
 * Still spotted some issues in ref publishers (check all). —Giggy 08:05, 11 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Done if threes any more can you please identify them.  REZTER  TALK   &oslash;  11:36, 11 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Try and include all the reviews in the reception section in the infobox and vice versa.
 * The MusicOMH review isn't starred, so does it really belong?  Black  ngold29   07:19, 11 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Yeah, use something like "(positive)" where the stars would normally go. eg. Diorama (album) —Giggy 08:05, 11 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Done  REZTER  TALK   &oslash;  11:42, 11 July 2008 (UTC)
 * "which was removed from Slipknot due to copyright reasons" - "due to copyright reasons" is poor wording... perhaps "due to copyright issues" (the "due" and "reasons" are somewhat redundant)
 * Done
 * Check italics for PopMatters.
 * Done
 * http://www.musicomh.com/albums/slipknot_1105.htm says it's rarely played live, not that it's never been played live ("as well as the first ever live performance of "Skin Ticket""). It also doesn't mention "Iowa" despite being the ref used for that statement.
 * The "first ever live performance" comes from the album itself. Before the song starts the singer says, 'This is a song we've never done live before, ever' or something to that effect. Should we just cite the album somehow?  Black  ngold29   07:19, 11 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Yep, just say in a ref that it's part of the album. —Giggy 08:05, 11 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Done  REZTER  TALK   &oslash;  11:45, 11 July 2008 (UTC)
 * One more thing; where does the album's title come from? —Giggy 07:03, 11 July 2008 (UTC)
 * The band has 9 members, and it's live... so there ya go, I guess.  Black  ngold29   07:19, 11 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Hmm... no sources backing this up so you can say it in the article? —Giggy 08:05, 11 July 2008 (UTC)
 * No there's no sources or anything of bands explaining the title... it is kind of self explanatory but you can't put it in the article without sources.  REZTER  TALK   &oslash;  11:55, 11 July 2008 (UTC)