Talk:A-Yo (Lady Gaga song)/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk · contribs) 19:10, 13 November 2018 (UTC)


 * Grabbing for a review. Aoba47 (talk) 19:10, 13 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Infobox and lead
 * I believe the quotes in the lead require citation.
 * I would reduce this part (In order to promote the track's release) down to (To promote the track’s release) for more concise language.


 * Background and release
 * For this part (On her Twitter account Gaga), a comma is needed between “account” and “Gaga”.


 * Recording and composition
 * For this part (Lindsey as additional co-writer), I believe you need either “an” or “the” before the word “additional”.


 * Critical reception
 * Everything looks good here.


 * Chart performance
 * Good work here.


 * Live performances
 * For this part (For "A-Yo" Ronson), I comma is necessary between the song’s title and “Ronson”.
 * For this part (she played on a special guitar), I do not believe that “on” is necessary.


 * References
 * Vancouver Weekly is a red link. That is not an issue as I am assuming it is intentional, but I just wanted to let you know that it was there.


 * Final comments
 * Great work with the article. A majority of my comments are rather nitpicky, and should be resolved quite easily. I will pass this once my comments are addressed. Have a great rest of your week! Aoba47 (talk) 22:21, 13 November 2018 (UTC)
 * all done. Thanks for the quick review. Did some little bit of paraphrasing also while addressing your comments. — IB [ Poke ] 10:02, 14 November 2018 (UTC)


 * Verdict
 * I am glad that I could help. I will ✅ this as a GA. Aoba47 (talk) 19:36, 14 November 2018 (UTC)