Talk:A8 (Croatia)/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Thine Antique Pen (talk · contribs) 10:51, 28 June 2012 (UTC)

I shall review. ⇒ T A  P  10:51, 28 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * Generally fine, but replace "(39.8 mi) road in Croatia. It connects" with "(39.8 mi) motorway in Croatia. It connects"
 * I reworded the sentence, but I'm not clear on the wikilink here. Motorways in Croatia currently links to the same section as Highways in Croatia is use of the redirect problematic or is the latter solution simply preferable?--Tomobe03 (talk) 11:12, 28 June 2012 (UTC)
 * My error. Simply, change "road" to "motorway", I think. ⇒ T A  P  11:14, 28 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Changed.--Tomobe03 (talk) 11:15, 28 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Feel free to strike when done.


 * Include information about being a toll road
 * Actually, the last paragraph of the lead deals with this issue already. Is there something missing?--Tomobe03 (talk) 11:34, 28 June 2012 (UTC)
 * I did a minor edit. Grand now. ⇒ T A  P  11:39, 28 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Uh, yes, that was missing. Thanks.--Tomobe03 (talk) 11:44, 28 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Nothing major. :) ⇒ T A  P  11:47, 28 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Route description
 * "is an east–west motorway" &mdash; clarify in more detail, both opposite directions.
 * Added information on which cities (Rijeka and Rovinj - well, their general area) it connects and what other routes it links (A7 and A9).--Tomobe03 (talk) 11:49, 28 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Tolls
 * Include some of this in lead.
 * I'm striking this out because it is dealt with already in the "Lead" part of the review.--Tomobe03 (talk) 11:59, 28 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Please explain a 'ticket system'.
 * I added a very brief explanation of the system - I felt reluctant to proceed at a greater detail because the term is wikilinked in the same sentence. Do you feel more is needed here?--Tomobe03 (talk) 11:24, 28 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Grand. ⇒ T A  P  11:27, 28 June 2012 (UTC)


 * History
 * Italicise 'shape' in ' Y shape '.
 * Done.--Tomobe03 (talk) 11:15, 28 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Future
 * Grand


 * Traffic volume
 * Fine


 * Service areas
 * Good.

I will put this On Hold for now. ⇒ T A  P  10:59, 28 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Thank you for taking time and effort to review this article. I believe your comments helped improve its overall quality.--Tomobe03 (talk) 12:06, 28 June 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Passed. ⇒ T A  P  12:19, 28 June 2012 (UTC)