Talk:ACWA Power

Proposed change
Hi, full disclosure: I am an employee of ACWA Power working in the Marketing and Communications team. I would like to make some changes to the article in good faith, in order to make sure the information is accurate and up-to-date. Please review my changes below -- all the information has been sourced to independent third parties, apart from one line on employee numbers which comes from a document from ACWA Power posted on the Saudi Exchange website. All feedback on my proposed edits is very welcome. — Preceding unsigned comment added by MferrariACWA (talk • contribs) 07:11, 16 August 2023 (UTC)

Reason for change: Existing information is outdated and contradicts information in other sections of the article.

Reference: https://www.thenationalnews.com/business/energy/2023/06/13/acwa-power-signs-agreement-to-develop-15bn-wind-energy-project-in-kazakhstan/ MferrariACWA (talk) 14:49, 15 August 2023 (UTC)

Reason for change: Existing information is outdated and incomplete.

References: (Combined cycle power plants) https://www.arabnews.com/node/2193036/business-economy

(Solar) https://www.reuters.com/article/us-investment-mideast-acwa-power-idUSKCN0IB1Y420141022

(Wind) https://www.arabnews.com/node/2352166/business-economy

(Desalination) https://www.thenationalnews.com/business/energy/2023/04/14/saudi-arabias-acwa-power-to-develop-6773-million-desalination-project-on-red-sea-coast/

(Green hydrogen) https://www.bloomberg.com/news/articles/2023-03-02/saudi-arabia-s-acwa-power-eyes-three-more-giant-hydrogen-plants#xj4y7vzkg

Reason for change: Information is outdated.

References: (Portfolio) https://www.arabnews.com/node/2327796/business-economy

(Employee numbers) https://www.saudiexchange.sa/Resources/fsPdf/12317_2362_2023-08-09_21-22-55_en.pdf

(Renewables statistics) https://english.aawsat.com/business/4482106-saudi-acwa-power-reports-1824-mln-profit-h1 — Preceding unsigned comment added by MferrariACWA (talk • contribs) 07:05, 16 August 2023 (UTC)

Reason for change: Information on awards is not notable and could be removed. MferrariACWA (talk) 07:32, 16 August 2023 (UTC)
 * I'd like to help, but don't see any sources for the updated information you're requesting to have added. There's a list of sources, but they appear to be from the older content. Can you add proper inline citations for the new information? STEM info  (talk) 00:56, 17 August 2023 (UTC)


 * Thank you. It seems I can't add inline citations to this template so I have added them below each section. Please let me know if this helps. MferrariACWA (talk) 13:27, 17 August 2023 (UTC)

Reply 17-AUG-2023
Your edit request could not be reviewed because the request is not formatted correctly. In the collapsed section below titled Request edit examples, I have illustrated two: The first shows how the edit request was submitted; the second shows how requests should be submitted in the future.
 * 1) The citation style predominantly used by the ACWA Power article appears to be Citation Style 1. The citation style used in the edit request consists of bare URL's. Any requested edit of yours which may be implemented will need to resemble the current style already in use in the article – in this case, CS1. (See WP:CITEVAR.)
 * 2) Citation ref tags have not been placed within the requested text indicating which portions of the text the source is referencing. (See WP:INTEGRITY.)

INCORRECT The Sun's diameter is 864,337.3 miles, while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles. The Sun's temperature is 5,778 Kelvin.

In the example above there are three URL's provided with the claim statements, but these URL's have not been placed using Citation Style 1, which is the style predominantly used by the ACWA Power article. Additionally, ref tags have not been placed within the text at the exact positions where the information they reference resides. Using the correct style and the correct positioning of the ref tags, the WikiFormatted text should resemble the following:

CORRECT The Sun's diameter is 864,337.3 miles, while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles. The Sun's temperature is 5,778 Kelvin. Which displays as: The Sun's diameter is 864,337.3 miles,[1] while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles.[2] The Sun's temperature is 5,778 Kelvin.[3]

References

^ Sjöblad, Tristan. . Academic Press, 2020, p. 1. ^ Harinath, Prisha. , Science, 51(78):46. 2020. ^ Uemura, Shū. . Academic Press, 2020, p. 2. 

In the example above the references have been formatted according to Citation Style 1, which shows the author, the source's name, date, etc. Also, the ref tags are placed in the exact location where the text which they reference resides. As Wikipedia is a volunteer project, edit requests such yours are generally expected to have this formatting done before the request is submitted for review.

Kindly write your edit request so that it aligns more with the second example shown in the collapsed section above, and feel free to submit that edit request below this reply post at your earliest convenience. If you have any questions about this formatting please don't hesitate to ask myself or another editor. Regards, Spintendo  17:59, 17 August 2023 (UTC)


 * Thanks for your input @Spintendo. The ref tags are not showing up when using TextDiff:
 * Is there a better way to format the edit request to make it clear which sections need to be replaced? MferrariACWA (talk) 08:30, 20 August 2023 (UTC)

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Please remove: "ACWA Power is a developer, investor, co-owner and operator of a portfolio of power generation and desalinated water production plants currently with presence in 10 countries including in the Middle East and North Africa, Southern Africa and South East Asia regions. ACWA Power’s portfolio, with an investment value in excess of USD 33 billion, can generate more than 22 GW of power and produce 2.5 million m3/day of desalinated water to be delivered on a bulk basis to state utilities and industrial majors on long term off-take contracts under Public-Private-Partnership, Concession and Utility Services Outsourcing models (BOO/BOOT)

And replace with: "ACWA Power is a developer, investor, co-owner and operator of a portfolio of power generation and desalinated water production plants with a presence in 12 countries across the Middle East, Africa, and Central and South-East Asia. ACWA Power’s portfolio of projects in operation and development has an investment value in excess of USD 74.8 billion, and a capacity of more than 50 GW of power and 6.8 million m3/day of desalinated water. "

Reason for change: Existing information is outdated and contradicts information in other sections of the article.
 * ✅ STEM info  (talk) 21:50, 23 August 2023 (UTC)

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Please remove:: "Its energy portfolio includes efficient combined cycle power plants, solar (Photovoltaic PV) and Concentrated Solar Power (CSP), geothermal, wind, waste-to-energy (WtE) and coal pollution mitigation.

And replace with: Its energy portfolio includes efficient combined cycle power plants, solar (photovoltaic [PV] and concentrated solar power [CSP]) , wind , desalination plants , and green hydrogen projects.

Reason for change: Existing information is outdated and incomplete.

✅ Removing the geothermal, waste-to-energy and coal pollution mitigation items was not done without consideration, since it's hard to prove a negative, but I looked on the AWCA web site and in available sourcing, and couldn't find anything that suggested those projects still existed. I corrected the Bloomberg link and left it in, but I can't access the data. Anyone with access to Bloomberg should be able to confirm the info. STEM info (talk) 22:42, 23 August 2023 (UTC)


 * Hi @STEMinfo, thanks very much for your assistance throughout this process. It's much appreciated.
 * Just one more small request, it seems this section is duplicated in the article. Would you please remove the duplicate? MferrariACWA (talk) 16:09, 24 August 2023 (UTC)
 * My error. Fixed. And for future use, typing the @ doesn't ping people.  You need to use one of the  ,  or  templates. That generates the @username text you're used to seeing, while pinging people.  STEM info  (talk) 19:14, 24 August 2023 (UTC)
 * got it, thanks again MferrariACWA (talk) 19:23, 24 August 2023 (UTC)

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Please remove: Headquartered in Saudi Arabia, ACWA Power maintains regional offices in Dubai, Istanbul, Cairo, Rabat, Johannesburg, Hanoi and Beijing.[4][5] It invests in, develops, co-owns and operates a portfolio of 68 projects on three continents, with the capacity to generate 22.8GW of power and produce 2.5 million m3/day of desalinated water.[6][7][8] ACWA Power and its subsidiary operating companies employ over 3,000 people in projects in 11 different countries.[4] As of 2014, 8% of ACWA Power's energy portfolio was in renewable energy. ACWA Power has expressed an intention to increase its investment in renewables:[9] of the new bids and projects still in the financing stage announced in 2014 US$7.4 billion of US$15 billion were in renewable energy.[3]

And replace with this: Headquartered in Saudi Arabia, ACWA Power maintains regional offices in Riyadh, Jeddah, Dubai, Baku, Beijing, Cairo, Addis Abbaba, Jakarta, Amman, Rabat, Johannesburg, Istanbul, Tashkent, and Hanoi. It invests in, develops, co-owns and operates a portfolio of 77 projects with the capacity to generate 50.4 GW of power and produce 6.8 million m3/day of desalinated water. ACWA Power and its subsidiary operating companies employ over 4,000 people in projects in 12 different countries. ACWA Power is aiming to increase the share of renewable energy in its portfolio to 50 percent by 2030. As of 2023, 46% of the company’s energy portfolio was in renewables.

Reason for change: Information is outdated.


 * ✅ FYI that references go after the punctuation. STEM info  (talk) 22:01, 23 August 2023 (UTC)

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Please remove: "Awards: ACWA Power won the following awards in 2014:

The Acquisition International Fund awards: Energy Investment Firm of the Year – Saudi Arabia,[93] a vanity award MEED quality awards: Angus Hindley Award for Project Excellence[94]"

Reason for change: Information on awards is not notable and could be removed. MferrariACWA (talk) 11:13, 23 August 2023 (UTC)
 * ✅ STEM info  (talk) 21:55, 23 August 2023 (UTC)

Edit request
Please update this figure in the first paragraph: 6.8 million m3/day of desalinated water.

The new figure is: 7.6 million m3/day of desalinated water.

Reason for change: The figure has increased with the addition of the Hassyan IWP desalination plant to ACWA Power's portfolio. MferrariACWA (talk) 12:09, 27 August 2023 (UTC)
 * HouseBlastertalk 02:10, 28 August 2023 (UTC)

Edit request
The water desalination figure in the 'background' section needs to be updated.

Please replace: "...produce 6.8 million m3/day of desalinated water."

With: "...produce 7.6 million m3/day of desalinated water. "

Reason for change: The figure has increased with the addition of the Hassyan IWP in Dubai to ACWA Power's portfolio.

Thanks in advance. MferrariACWA (talk) 08:50, 28 August 2023 (UTC)


 * ✅ Spintendo  03:40, 30 August 2023 (UTC)

Edit request
The investment value of ACWA Power's portfolio has now increased and needs to be updated.

Please replace "an investment value in excess of USD 74.8 billion"

With: "an investment value in excess of USD 79.4 billion. "

Thanks, MferrariACWA (talk) 08:23, 27 September 2023 (UTC)
 * An investment value of 79.4 billion is not negated by the phrase "an investment value in excess of USD 74.8 billion" because the figure of 79.4 billion is a number in excess of 74.8 billion. Thus, the current figure of "in excess of USD 74.8 billion" is still valid. Regards, Spintendo  19:49, 27 September 2023 (UTC)

Edit request
Hi, would very much appreciate if the 'structure' section could be updated to include ACWA Power's vice chairman and managing director Raad Al Saady.

Please update with: "ACWA Power's board of directors is chaired by Mohammad Abdullah Abunayyan, with Raad Al Saady as its Vice Chairman and Managing Director, and Marco Arcelli as its CEO..

Thank you, MferrariACWA (talk) 08:21, 31 October 2023 (UTC)


 * ✅ Regards, Spintendo  03:33, 1 November 2023 (UTC)

Edit request
Hi,

Please kindly update the following information to reflect recent additions to the company's portfolio:

In first section: Remove: "ACWA Power's portfolio of projects in operation and development has an investment value in excess of USD 74.8 billion, and a capacity of more than 50 GW of power and 7.6 million m3/day of desalinated water."

Replace with: "ACWA Power's portfolio of projects in operation and development has an investment value of USD 82.8 billion, and a capacity of 53.7 GW of power and 7.6 million m3/day of desalinated water. "

In background section: Remove: "It invests in, develops, co-owns and operates a portfolio of 77 projects with the capacity to generate 50.4 GW of power and produce 7.6 million m3/day of desalinated water."

Replace with: "It invests in, develops, co-owns and operates a portfolio of 77 projects with the capacity to generate 53.7 GW of power and produce 7.6 million m3/day of desalinated water. "

Thank you,

MferrariACWA (talk) 10:20, 11 December 2023 (UTC)




 * Thanks, Lewcm Talk to me! 19:06, 11 December 2023 (UTC)