Talk:ADAPT Act

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 3 April 2020 and 10 June 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Dbortner.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 16:44, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Critique
the article needs a lot more work "to work".
 * It needs trimming, as it is overly wordy and long. The style is often unencyclopedic.
 * The inverted commas need to be exchanged- all have been copied-pasted.
 * background section needs to be in chronological order.
 * the style of referencing is odd with raw links- Provelt is a very easy to use program which does it properly and automatically.
 * on a content level most importantly, it is extremely one sided, it needs more than primary sources --Wuerzele (talk) 20:52, 31 May 2020 (UTC)