Talk:AIX Connect/GA1

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 17:55, 24 April 2016 (UTC)

Hi! Happy to review. Sainsf &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 17:55, 24 April 2016 (UTC)


 * Hi! Let me know the comments! Magentic Manifestations (talk) 18:33, 24 April 2016 (UTC)

Nice article. Here are my comments:


 * Lead:
 * joint venture with AirAsia Berhad holding 49% of the airline, Tata Sons holding 40.06% and Telestra Tradeplace having the remaining 10% in the airline Better rephrase this as "joint venture with AirAsia Berhad holding 49% stake in the airline, Tata Sons holding 40.06% and Telestra Tradeplace holding the remaining 10%." Please check that the meaning is the same.✅
 * What exactly is Telestra Tradeplace?✅
 * Air Asia India commenced operations on 12 June 2014 with Bangalore as its primary hub. Would look better in first para.✅
 *  The company marked Tata's return to aviation industry after 60 years, having ceded Air India in 1946. Would look better in second para.✅


 * Sainsf, done!Magentic Manifestations (talk) 17:02, 28 April 2016 (UTC)

Thanks,. Now, continuing with the rest of the article:


 * History:
 * foreign direct investment of up to 49% "in airlines"?✅
 *  with Tata sons  "S"ons✅
 * ₹1.25 (1.9¢ US)/available seat kilometer "/" would look better as "per". "Kilometre" as per BE.✅
 * The introduction of AirAsia was expected to By whom?✅
 * an amount of US$50 million Could be converted to INR. (stated originally in US$, so did not convert)
 * rent/lease aircraft  The slash could be better replaced by "or".✅
 * AirAsia India was established on 28 March 2013. AirAsia is the first foreign airline to set up a subsidiary in India. Can be combined.✅
 * as its secondary hub Remove "as".✅
 *  after IndiGo and SpiceJet with  "SpiceJet, with"✅


 * Corporate affairs:
 * founder of AirAsia group announced "group, announced"✅
 * airline, however the latter refused "airline; however, Tata refused"✅
 * Somewhere you say "chairman", elsewhere "Chairman".✅
 *  chief adviser  "advisor" (BE)✅


 * Destinations:
 * If each entry has a source then what is ref. 29 for?(think, no harm in additional reference from airline website.)


 * Fleet:
 * Link Airbus.
 * import 10 A320-200 aircraft Would be better to say "ten" here.✅
 * AirAsia India on 21 March 2015 "On 21 March 2015, AirAsia India"✅
 * and the is registered as VT-APJ Error?✅
 * Honor --> Honour (BE).✅


 * Sources:
 * In ref. 18, the publisher is Anna.aero.✅

I think that should be it. These addressed, I would be happy to promote this. Cheers! Sainsf &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 04:26, 30 April 2016 (UTC)


 * Sainsf, done!Magentic Manifestations (talk) 07:35, 30 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Very well, promoted. Cheers! Sainsf  &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 07:36, 30 April 2016 (UTC)