Talk:AMF Bowling World Lanes

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"Unneccesary one-liners" and "poor controls"? If those and phrases like them are critic's words, put them in quotations and have a reference. mynameinc 22:44, 27 December 2008 (UTC)
 * It already is referenced. Quotes are only used for the exact words taken from the review; if they are not in quotes, then those aren't the exact words used in the review. Gary King  ( talk ) 22:47, 27 December 2008 (UTC)
 * As of now that section is says thatt the game has unneccesary one-liners and poor controls. "They were disappointed with, in what their opinion was poor controls..." would be much better. mynameinc 22:58, 27 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Nowhere in the following text from the article does it state that those are opinions:

"They were also disappointed in the character one-liners that emphasized unnecessary stereotypes, along with poor controls which made the game more difficult to control." mynameinc 23:00, 27 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Better? Gary King  ( talk ) 23:01, 27 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Yes. mynameinc 23:10, 27 December 2008 (UTC)