Talk:ARA Moreno/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ironholds (talk) 19:22, 20 June 2010 (UTC)
 * "two million pounds sterling" - link the current value.
 * Isn't it linked already in the background section? — Ed   (talk  •  majestic titan)  03:42, 22 June 2010 (UTC)
 * That's the section I'm talking about. How much is 2 million pounds sterling today? Ironholds (talk) 12:19, 22 June 2010 (UTC)
 * says 158 million; is this was you were looking for? — Ed   (talk  •  majestic titan)  05:38, 23 June 2010 (UTC)
 * Not exactly; you need to format it in article. See this. Ironholds (talk) 13:19, 23 June 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the example; I've stolen your wording and modified this article. — Ed   (talk  •  majestic titan)  03:58, 24 June 2010 (UTC)
 * "Argentine Naval Commission's chief, which was overseeing " - appears to be "the chief, which was overseeing", and thus grammatically incorrect. The second Argentina also seems extraneous. I suggest rearranging it as "Isabel Betbeder, wife to the chief of the Argentine Naval Commission, which was overseeing the construction of the ship"
 * Done, but not with your quite with your wording (may want to double-check me :) — Ed   (talk  •  majestic titan)  03:42, 22 June 2010 (UTC)
 * "United States' State Department" - United States Department of State, and link.
 * Done, there was a link earlier but it wasn't very prominent, so I added it again. — Ed   (talk  •  majestic titan)  03:42, 22 June 2010 (UTC)
 * "The trials were plagued with serious engine trouble. They culminated on 2 November, when an entire turbine failed," - "The trials were plagued with serious engine trouble, culminating with the failure of an entire turbine on 2 November. Moreno was forced to put in at Rockland, Maine..." and so on. Ironholds (talk) 19:22, 20 June 2010 (UTC)
 * Done, thank you! :) — Ed   (talk  •  majestic titan)  03:42, 22 June 2010 (UTC)