Talk:A Balloon Site, Coventry

Improving grammar and in-line citations
The article is organized well, concise, and uses up-to-date sources. To improve the article, I would suggest focusing on adding more in-line citations since some paragraphs have multiple sentences in a row that lack a citation. I would also suggest improving grammatical errors in places such as "do so previously" or "three women and man". There are some comma splices that need to be edited too. Attention to these matters will improve the article quality. EditingDaily2023 (talk) 15:33, 15 February 2023 (UTC)
 * There is nothing that is not supported by a citation. - SchroCat (talk) 18:13, 2 May 2023 (UTC)