Talk:A Boy and His Blob: Trouble on Blobolonia/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin (talk · contribs) 12:30, 13 November 2011 (UTC)

This is one of those games I have never played yet but which is on my list of games I'll try to play somewhen in the future. This article is short; it won't be long until I finish the review. I will finish it in 3 days at most.


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * is a blog, and I can't find its about page. It is better to replace it with a more reliable source.
 * ✅ I've removed the last sentence and source, as it was not written by Kurt Kalata as per our list of reliable sources. ~ Hibana (talk) 14:19, 13 November 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * "lives at the top." - maybe just "life points"? "at the top" should be removed, as HUD is everytime at the top.
 * ✅ I removed "at the top" but called them "extra lives" since "life points" would not be accurate (the player dies after one hit). ~ Hibana (talk) 14:19, 13 November 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * "lives at the top." - maybe just "life points"? "at the top" should be removed, as HUD is everytime at the top.
 * ✅ I removed "at the top" but called them "extra lives" since "life points" would not be accurate (the player dies after one hit). ~ Hibana (talk) 14:19, 13 November 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:


 * ISSN check: one broken
 * ✅ ~ Hibana (talk) 14:19, 13 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Dabsolver check: ok
 * Checklinks check: ok
 * Reflinks check: ok
 * "industry veteran" - why? how?
 * ✅ Phrase removed. ~ Hibana (talk) 14:19, 13 November 2011 (UTC)
 * What does "three ways" in "However, the plans never came to fruition due to deadlines and difficulty in dividing production resources three ways" means?
 * ✅ ~ Hibana (talk) 14:19, 13 November 2011 (UTC)


 * Pass Good job!-- ♫GoP♫ T C N 14:20, 13 November 2011 (UTC)